Love's Beginnings
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Comment from robyn corum
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Ain't that the truth! hahaha I remember being young and single and seeing someone I found interesting. The ground would suddenly become populated with alligators and traps. This is a great entry. Thanks!
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L,
Ain't that the truth! hahaha I remember being young and single and seeing someone I found interesting. The ground would suddenly become populated with alligators and traps. This is a great entry. Thanks!
Comment Written 03-Dec-2020
Comment from ESOSTINE
Lovely and encouraging! The hard part is over, while the lasting, loving smooth part is about to begin. The poem said a lot in just few words. Thanks for sharing your thought.
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Lovely and encouraging! The hard part is over, while the lasting, loving smooth part is about to begin. The poem said a lot in just few words. Thanks for sharing your thought.
Comment Written 03-Dec-2020
Comment from judiverse
This is precious. Good advice, too. People may become so anxious about meeting someone of the opposite sex and hoping to make a good impression that they become tongue-tied or say something stupid. There is really a lot of meaning to your 2-4-2. Best of luck in the contest. This is eye-catching. judi
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This is precious. Good advice, too. People may become so anxious about meeting someone of the opposite sex and hoping to make a good impression that they become tongue-tied or say something stupid. There is really a lot of meaning to your 2-4-2. Best of luck in the contest. This is eye-catching. judi
Comment Written 03-Dec-2020
Comment from Suzanna Ray
Dear lancellot, what a wonderful way to start my Fan Story day just by reading this short and telling 242 contest entry.
Everything you say in this one, is all that needs to be said; when it comes to human relationships
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Dear lancellot, what a wonderful way to start my Fan Story day just by reading this short and telling 242 contest entry.
Everything you say in this one, is all that needs to be said; when it comes to human relationships
Comment Written 03-Dec-2020
Comment from RodG
Your poem--eight syllables--states the facts so simply and truly. Most relationships begin with anxiety. One or the other (maybe both) don't know how to attract the other's attention and are afraid to take that first step.
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Your poem--eight syllables--states the facts so simply and truly. Most relationships begin with anxiety. One or the other (maybe both) don't know how to attract the other's attention and are afraid to take that first step.
Comment Written 03-Dec-2020
Comment from Seshadri_Sreenivasan
You have expressed one of Life's mysteries in 8 words. Wow! This has happened to me umpteen number of times. A unique form of poetry which I am trying to learn. Good luck in the contest!
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You have expressed one of Life's mysteries in 8 words. Wow! This has happened to me umpteen number of times. A unique form of poetry which I am trying to learn. Good luck in the contest!
Comment Written 03-Dec-2020
Comment from Wendy G
Short and succinct, but tells a big truth about relationships, and their awkward beginnings, particularly (but not only) for young ones. Well written. Best wishes for the contest.
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Short and succinct, but tells a big truth about relationships, and their awkward beginnings, particularly (but not only) for young ones. Well written. Best wishes for the contest.
Comment Written 03-Dec-2020
Comment from LeftHandedScribe
Oh, this so sweet. It's young love but really all love. It is that first meeting when the butterflies are in flight and we want someone to like us. Beautiful.
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Oh, this so sweet. It's young love but really all love. It is that first meeting when the butterflies are in flight and we want someone to like us. Beautiful.
Comment Written 02-Dec-2020
Comment from DonandVicki
How true, I always found myself breathless when I got up the nerve to say hello to a pretty girl. It wasn't until much later the girls were hoping that I would notice them. Go figure.
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How true, I always found myself breathless when I got up the nerve to say hello to a pretty girl. It wasn't until much later the girls were hoping that I would notice them. Go figure.
Comment Written 02-Dec-2020
Comment from Mrs. KT
Hah! Lancelot!
Isn't that the truth?
And I cringe to think of when I was a young woman, so timid to make the first move - Always thinking if I did, I would be considered "forward."
Your 2/4/2 poem brought a smile to my face ... remembering!
Thank you!
diane
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Hah! Lancelot!
Isn't that the truth?
And I cringe to think of when I was a young woman, so timid to make the first move - Always thinking if I did, I would be considered "forward."
Your 2/4/2 poem brought a smile to my face ... remembering!
Thank you!
diane
Comment Written 02-Dec-2020
