To Just Pause
watch snowflakes dance, just be present38 total reviews
Comment from HarryT
Nice relaxing thought expressed in few words. One can easily picture walking or sitting by a window watching Susie Snowflake tumbling down.
Enjoyed the strong image. Wondering why you didn't use the plural snowflakes dance? Just me. Keep writing.
reply by the author on 03-Dec-2020
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Nice relaxing thought expressed in few words. One can easily picture walking or sitting by a window watching Susie Snowflake tumbling down.
Enjoyed the strong image. Wondering why you didn't use the plural snowflakes dance? Just me. Keep writing.
Comment Written 02-Dec-2020
reply by the author on 03-Dec-2020
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I feel that my mind is trying to focus on that just one perfect snowflake that somehow is dancing just a little bit more uniquely...
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Got it. Thanks for the reply.
Comment from Janet Foor
A lovely 3/7/5 poem for the writing prompt. I am from the northland and love to watch the snowflakes dance. Today, I enjoy seeing pictures of the snowflake dance. :))))
Blessings
Janet
reply by the author on 02-Dec-2020
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A lovely 3/7/5 poem for the writing prompt. I am from the northland and love to watch the snowflakes dance. Today, I enjoy seeing pictures of the snowflake dance. :))))
Blessings
Janet
Comment Written 02-Dec-2020
reply by the author on 02-Dec-2020
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Janet, thank you, I hope that you find this winter season warm and filled with good cheer!
Comment from LJbutterfly
It's beautiful and peaceful to stand and quietly watch snowflakes flutter down to the grown or land on trees. If you look straight up, you can become hypnotized. Your description is perfect and perfectly pairs with your artwork. Best wishes in the contest.
reply by the author on 02-Dec-2020
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It's beautiful and peaceful to stand and quietly watch snowflakes flutter down to the grown or land on trees. If you look straight up, you can become hypnotized. Your description is perfect and perfectly pairs with your artwork. Best wishes in the contest.
Comment Written 02-Dec-2020
reply by the author on 02-Dec-2020
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Lorraine, thank you!
Comment from LeftHandedScribe
Yes, it is present moment stuff! I love the whimsy of this poem as well as the crisp and colorful photo you chose. May we all take this time to be more present and notice the simple pleasures.
reply by the author on 02-Dec-2020
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Yes, it is present moment stuff! I love the whimsy of this poem as well as the crisp and colorful photo you chose. May we all take this time to be more present and notice the simple pleasures.
Comment Written 02-Dec-2020
reply by the author on 02-Dec-2020
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Shauna, smiling back in the present moment!
Comment from Sandra du Plessis
A very well-written 5-7-5 poem about taking a moment and pause to watch the snow flakes floating from the sky to the ground. It is worth the excitement everytime.
reply by the author on 02-Dec-2020
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A very well-written 5-7-5 poem about taking a moment and pause to watch the snow flakes floating from the sky to the ground. It is worth the excitement everytime.
Comment Written 02-Dec-2020
reply by the author on 02-Dec-2020
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Thank you Sandra!
Comment from ESOSTINE
The poem was great within the contest restrictions of the 3-7-5 prompt entry. 'Watching snowflakes dance' was an interesting presentation of snowflakes fall from the sky during winter, and I could imagine it was happening in the present. Thanks for sharing!
reply by the author on 02-Dec-2020
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The poem was great within the contest restrictions of the 3-7-5 prompt entry. 'Watching snowflakes dance' was an interesting presentation of snowflakes fall from the sky during winter, and I could imagine it was happening in the present. Thanks for sharing!
Comment Written 02-Dec-2020
reply by the author on 02-Dec-2020
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Thank you kind sir!
Comment from Raul1
I have enjoyed reading your piece of poetry. It is beautifully and well written. It is clear and concise. Thanks for sharing! Excellent work! No grammatical errors. Good luck!
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reply by the author on 02-Dec-2020
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I have enjoyed reading your piece of poetry. It is beautifully and well written. It is clear and concise. Thanks for sharing! Excellent work! No grammatical errors. Good luck!
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Comment Written 02-Dec-2020
reply by the author on 02-Dec-2020
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Raul, thank you very much.
Comment from Anne Johnston
Today, we are experiencing some snowflakes and your poem aptly describes how relaxing it is to just take a few minutes and enjoy them as they fall. Very well done.
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reply by the author on 02-Dec-2020
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Today, we are experiencing some snowflakes and your poem aptly describes how relaxing it is to just take a few minutes and enjoy them as they fall. Very well done.
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Comment Written 02-Dec-2020
reply by the author on 02-Dec-2020
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Thank you Anne, enjoy and be warm and safe.
