My Daughter
A contest entry3 total reviews
Comment from lyenochka
Wow, you are so strong to deliver so easily! And what a magical moment for you and your husband and his very kind godfather! Loved your story!
Suggest a colon instead of a comma for the big revelation in this sentence.
Then he dropped the bombshell, (bombshell:)
to consider an epidermal. (epidural?)
reply by the author on 07-May-2022
Wow, you are so strong to deliver so easily! And what a magical moment for you and your husband and his very kind godfather! Loved your story!
Suggest a colon instead of a comma for the big revelation in this sentence.
Then he dropped the bombshell, (bombshell:)
to consider an epidermal. (epidural?)
Comment Written 06-May-2022
reply by the author on 07-May-2022
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Thank you so much Helene. I fixed the corrections a few moments ago. It was great that you enjoyed this so much, again thank you for reviewing. Blessings, hugs n smiles.
Comment from robyn corum
Dear Mystery Mom,
This is so bizarre. I swear I just got finished writing a review of this exact same post! The first one paid 77 cents and this one is offering 52. But they BOTH say they are entered into the same contest. I don't even know how you could have two pieces with the same title, let alone post it in the same contest. Sooooo confused!
reply by the author on 02-Dec-2020
Dear Mystery Mom,
This is so bizarre. I swear I just got finished writing a review of this exact same post! The first one paid 77 cents and this one is offering 52. But they BOTH say they are entered into the same contest. I don't even know how you could have two pieces with the same title, let alone post it in the same contest. Sooooo confused!
Comment Written 01-Dec-2020
reply by the author on 02-Dec-2020
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Thank you Robyn for reading, reviewing and your kind comments, I have no idea were both are but who knows.
Comment from Sally Law
How wonderful for you! This is a refreshing read especially at a time in history when babies are not valued as they should be.
Sending you my best today as always, and my very best for the upcoming contest,
Sally XOs...
reply by the author on 02-Dec-2020
How wonderful for you! This is a refreshing read especially at a time in history when babies are not valued as they should be.
Sending you my best today as always, and my very best for the upcoming contest,
Sally XOs...
Comment Written 01-Dec-2020
reply by the author on 02-Dec-2020
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Thank you Sally for reading, reviewing and your great comments.