Lame King
Essence of duck9 total reviews
Comment from L. Kalere
I love it! Am in chuckle mode over your darling two liner. It just might have something to do with a certain politician, who's name shall not be mentioned?
You have an excellent chance in the contest. Best of luck.
Linda
reply by the author on 02-Dec-2020
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I love it! Am in chuckle mode over your darling two liner. It just might have something to do with a certain politician, who's name shall not be mentioned?
You have an excellent chance in the contest. Best of luck.
Linda
Comment Written 02-Dec-2020
reply by the author on 02-Dec-2020
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Haha thank you Linda.
I am delighted to hear it made you chuckle. ;)
Best
John
Comment from AlfredScott
Combined with the art work, this 2-line poem inspires many ideas. The lame king looks like he's in a dungeon, looking for allies for his cause, but probably not expecting much. What exactly is his demand, we wonder. To donate a leg or to risk life and limb for his cause?
reply by the author on 02-Dec-2020
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Combined with the art work, this 2-line poem inspires many ideas. The lame king looks like he's in a dungeon, looking for allies for his cause, but probably not expecting much. What exactly is his demand, we wonder. To donate a leg or to risk life and limb for his cause?
Comment Written 02-Dec-2020
reply by the author on 02-Dec-2020
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Thank you Alfred, I appreciate your comments.
Best
John
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You're welcome.
Comment from ESOSTINE
The two line poem met the conditions under the contest restrictions, and flowed freely.I could relate the poem to dining with the devil and the heavy price that goes with it. Thanks for sharing your thoughts.
reply by the author on 02-Dec-2020
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The two line poem met the conditions under the contest restrictions, and flowed freely.I could relate the poem to dining with the devil and the heavy price that goes with it. Thanks for sharing your thoughts.
Comment Written 02-Dec-2020
reply by the author on 02-Dec-2020
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Thank you Esostine. I appreciate your thoughts on this short verse.
Best
John
Comment from Omar sb
Very clever piece! Truly a "lame" king.
If you're not willing to sacrifice a limb during his reign, you will not be allowed to serve within his parliament.
Love it!
Thanks for sharing.
reply by the author on 02-Dec-2020
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Very clever piece! Truly a "lame" king.
If you're not willing to sacrifice a limb during his reign, you will not be allowed to serve within his parliament.
Love it!
Thanks for sharing.
Comment Written 02-Dec-2020
reply by the author on 02-Dec-2020
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Thank you Omar. I really appreciate your comments. I am glad you liked it.
Best
John
Comment from Michael Ludwinder
I thought this was great. Very creative and I like how you say so much with this poem even though it is only two lines. I would not want to stand with this King! Great job!
reply by the author on 02-Dec-2020
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I thought this was great. Very creative and I like how you say so much with this poem even though it is only two lines. I would not want to stand with this King! Great job!
Comment Written 02-Dec-2020
reply by the author on 02-Dec-2020
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Michael, I am very appreciative of your generous review. Thank you so much.
Best
John
Comment from Dolly'sPoems
Oh dear, this guy seems a bit dangerous to me! Did he cut off a limb to escape! Whatever the meaning here it is clever and it is scary, forever the joker, you, love Dolly x
reply by the author on 02-Dec-2020
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Oh dear, this guy seems a bit dangerous to me! Did he cut off a limb to escape! Whatever the meaning here it is clever and it is scary, forever the joker, you, love Dolly x
Comment Written 02-Dec-2020
reply by the author on 02-Dec-2020
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Haha Thank you Dolly. ;)
Replace lame king with lame duck and you can figure this out.
Take care and stay healthy.
Best
John x
Comment from Alcreator Litt Dear
This two line poem speaks of the essence of the lame king, essentially if you meet or visit him, he will ask for only your limb; well said, well done; thanks for sharing this. ALCREATOR
reply by the author on 02-Dec-2020
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This two line poem speaks of the essence of the lame king, essentially if you meet or visit him, he will ask for only your limb; well said, well done; thanks for sharing this. ALCREATOR
Comment Written 02-Dec-2020
reply by the author on 02-Dec-2020
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Thanks Al, I appreciate your comments.
Best
John
Comment from LeftHandedScribe
Wow...now this takes true talent. From the words to the genre to the inspired photograph, you paint a world with such brevity and such risky flair. Bravo!
reply by the author on 01-Dec-2020
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Wow...now this takes true talent. From the words to the genre to the inspired photograph, you paint a world with such brevity and such risky flair. Bravo!
Comment Written 01-Dec-2020
reply by the author on 01-Dec-2020
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Why thank you Shauna, I am truly touched by your kind words. You just made my day. :)
Keep safe and stay healthy.
All the best.
John
Comment from Miss Cookie Atkinson
I like the artwork you c choose to go with your poem.
They are a perfect match. you capture my attention from the start.
In fact it gave me a chuckle.
This was a clever thought, thank you for sharing.
Cookie
reply by the author on 02-Dec-2020
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I like the artwork you c choose to go with your poem.
They are a perfect match. you capture my attention from the start.
In fact it gave me a chuckle.
This was a clever thought, thank you for sharing.
Cookie
Comment Written 30-Nov-2020
reply by the author on 02-Dec-2020
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Thank you Cookie. I am so glad I ☺ made you chuckle.
All the very best to you.
Best
John
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Your very welcome.
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