A Toast
Hoping the future will be brighter10 total reviews
Comment from LisaMay
I'll drink to that toast also!! I like the sentiment expressed - it is relevant to our current situation and looks optimistically forward to better times.
(Personally, I feel there is too much space between the lines and that is distracting.)
reply by the author on 02-Dec-2020
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I'll drink to that toast also!! I like the sentiment expressed - it is relevant to our current situation and looks optimistically forward to better times.
(Personally, I feel there is too much space between the lines and that is distracting.)
Comment Written 02-Dec-2020
reply by the author on 02-Dec-2020
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Many thanks Lisa May
Comment from Gypsy Blue Rose
Hello, anonymous,
Good entry for the Rhyme That 1-6-1 writing prompt contest. Good syllables count and rhymes. The lines flow. Cute presentation. The syntaxt is a little off.... suggestion....
Here's
to many happy years
Cheers
. Good luck in the contest.
reply by the author on 02-Dec-2020
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Hello, anonymous,
Good entry for the Rhyme That 1-6-1 writing prompt contest. Good syllables count and rhymes. The lines flow. Cute presentation. The syntaxt is a little off.... suggestion....
Here's
to many happy years
Cheers
. Good luck in the contest.
Comment Written 02-Dec-2020
reply by the author on 02-Dec-2020
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Many thanks Gypsy.
Comment from Wendy G
The artwork is a perfect accompaniment to your 1-6-1 poem. It is hard to express oneself with so few syllables, but I am sure the whole world echoes your thoughts and wishes expressed in the toast!
reply by the author on 01-Dec-2020
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The artwork is a perfect accompaniment to your 1-6-1 poem. It is hard to express oneself with so few syllables, but I am sure the whole world echoes your thoughts and wishes expressed in the toast!
Comment Written 01-Dec-2020
reply by the author on 01-Dec-2020
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Thank you so much Wendy.
Comment from Sandra du Plessis
A very well-written 1-6-1 poem. I think most of us just wish thix year will end now finally and that we can start a better year from scratch, let all the evil things disappear and let's get back to normality.
reply by the author on 30-Nov-2020
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A very well-written 1-6-1 poem. I think most of us just wish thix year will end now finally and that we can start a better year from scratch, let all the evil things disappear and let's get back to normality.
Comment Written 30-Nov-2020
reply by the author on 30-Nov-2020
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Thanks Sandra
Comment from Dolly'sPoems
I so agree with your uplifting words here, this year has been such a challenge and it still isn't over yet as we hide inside our homes whilst the chaos outside continues, next year I welcome some positive changes, much enjoyed, love Dolly x
reply by the author on 30-Nov-2020
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I so agree with your uplifting words here, this year has been such a challenge and it still isn't over yet as we hide inside our homes whilst the chaos outside continues, next year I welcome some positive changes, much enjoyed, love Dolly x
Comment Written 30-Nov-2020
reply by the author on 30-Nov-2020
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Thanks Dolly. So glad you liked it. X
Comment from L. Kalere
And cheers to you too, for a cute but relevant little poem. Let's hope all the bad times will soon be behind us. Best of luck in the contest. BTW: nice artwork selection.
reply by the author on 30-Nov-2020
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And cheers to you too, for a cute but relevant little poem. Let's hope all the bad times will soon be behind us. Best of luck in the contest. BTW: nice artwork selection.
Comment Written 30-Nov-2020
reply by the author on 30-Nov-2020
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Thank you so much
Comment from Robert D Buechner
Nailed it. I want to have this poem printed and stamped on 7 shirts so I can wear it every single day of my week. And maybe a sweater, as well, so I'm covered for the Winter.
reply by the author on 30-Nov-2020
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Nailed it. I want to have this poem printed and stamped on 7 shirts so I can wear it every single day of my week. And maybe a sweater, as well, so I'm covered for the Winter.
Comment Written 30-Nov-2020
reply by the author on 30-Nov-2020
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Wow. What a great review. Thank you so much.
Comment from Goodadvicechan
This is a cheerful poem. We all like to see more happy days. Forget the dark ages, wake up and look at the bright sun. Everything will be alright.
Forget the dark days, only remember the good days.
reply by the author on 30-Nov-2020
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This is a cheerful poem. We all like to see more happy days. Forget the dark ages, wake up and look at the bright sun. Everything will be alright.
Forget the dark days, only remember the good days.
Comment Written 30-Nov-2020
reply by the author on 30-Nov-2020
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Thank you so much.
Comment from Badger_29
Love the form of the style of the content everything about this is perfect, the rhyming scheme, the picture, and the thing. Who says one can't drink to be merry and toast to such positive things as success now and in the future!
Blessings,
Brother Badger Cull
Darren
reply by the author on 30-Nov-2020
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Love the form of the style of the content everything about this is perfect, the rhyming scheme, the picture, and the thing. Who says one can't drink to be merry and toast to such positive things as success now and in the future!
Blessings,
Brother Badger Cull
Darren
Comment Written 30-Nov-2020
reply by the author on 30-Nov-2020
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Thanks for the great review and super6 stars.
Comment from LeftHandedScribe
This is such a delightful offering. The rhyme leaves one feeling very buoyant and hopeful. My only question is the 1-6-1 format. I believe you have 7 syllables in the second line.
reply by the author on 30-Nov-2020
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This is such a delightful offering. The rhyme leaves one feeling very buoyant and hopeful. My only question is the 1-6-1 format. I believe you have 7 syllables in the second line.
Comment Written 30-Nov-2020
reply by the author on 30-Nov-2020
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Thank you so much. I had just realised the mistake and was about to correct it.
