Comment from Wendy G

Excellent

A very clever take on the theme of betrayal - your own body has betrayed you. We can all identify, in one or more areas, with those feelings you have expressed with such humour and fine wit. Best wishes for the contest.

 Comment Written 28-Nov-2020

Comment from greyson ernst

Excellent

its really good i hope you keep writing i still might of joined soon but i still know a thing or two about poems
keep writing stay safe

sincerely Greyson Ernst

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 Comment Written 28-Nov-2020

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reply by the author on 29-Nov-2020

Hello Greyson
I appreciate your reviews of so many of my poems, but you really should try to write different ones for each item you review. I see you have written the exact same thing to other writers as well. You are new to the Fanstory site and that sort of copy-and-paste reviewing is not appreciated as a fair review.
I'm not saying this to be horrible; it is not fair to get reviewing 'money' without reviewing effort.

Comment from Bill Schott

Excellent

This poem, Betrayed By Her Body, is so funny. We all reach that point where the only ones checking us out are doctors and more doctors.

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 Comment Written 28-Nov-2020

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reply by the author on 29-Nov-2020

Sad but true.