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Poem 5/7/52 total reviews
Comment from equestrik
Good entry with both your chosen picture as well as your writing for the 'Love bites' writing prompt. There is certainly truth to your writing. Best to you in th contest.
reply by the author on 01-Dec-2020
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Good entry with both your chosen picture as well as your writing for the 'Love bites' writing prompt. There is certainly truth to your writing. Best to you in th contest.
Comment Written 27-Nov-2020
reply by the author on 01-Dec-2020
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Thanks for reading and sharing zanya
Comment from Janice Canerdy
In just seventeen syllables, you have said a great deal about failed relationships. Personification and metaphor convey a powerful message about the long-lasting--for some, permanent--pain.
reply by the author on 01-Dec-2020
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In just seventeen syllables, you have said a great deal about failed relationships. Personification and metaphor convey a powerful message about the long-lasting--for some, permanent--pain.
Comment Written 27-Nov-2020
reply by the author on 01-Dec-2020
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Yes very interesting commentary and thanks for sharing zanya
