Catitude
A peppered pickle poem14 total reviews
Comment from dragonpoet
June,
This followed the form well and gave a suncinct definition of spite and what it causes. You can say bite and grace are also actions of a cat.
Interesting arwork.
Keep writing and stay healthy.
Joan
reply by the author on 28-Nov-2020
June,
This followed the form well and gave a suncinct definition of spite and what it causes. You can say bite and grace are also actions of a cat.
Interesting arwork.
Keep writing and stay healthy.
Joan
Comment Written 28-Nov-2020
reply by the author on 28-Nov-2020
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Thank you so much!
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You are most kindly welcome, June
Joan
Comment from robyn corum
June,
You know, I can see you acting like a cat if anyone could ever anger you. I get that from this poem and your cool profile pic. That's weird, isn't it?
The poem was fun and clever in so many ways. I enjoyed the addition of the colored fonts here and there so we'd get more of your fun. Thanks!
reply by the author on 28-Nov-2020
June,
You know, I can see you acting like a cat if anyone could ever anger you. I get that from this poem and your cool profile pic. That's weird, isn't it?
The poem was fun and clever in so many ways. I enjoyed the addition of the colored fonts here and there so we'd get more of your fun. Thanks!
Comment Written 28-Nov-2020
reply by the author on 28-Nov-2020
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Yes, I am that crazy cat lady - in more ways than one! Thanks for dropping by to read and review! Always appreciate your input.
Comment from damommy
A good attitude is so important in life. I think it's 99% of how you feel and how you take what happens around you. You've written a delightful pepper pickle about this. Well done.
reply by the author on 28-Nov-2020
A good attitude is so important in life. I think it's 99% of how you feel and how you take what happens around you. You've written a delightful pepper pickle about this. Well done.
Comment Written 28-Nov-2020
reply by the author on 28-Nov-2020
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You are so right! We get what we give in life. Thank you for sharing your insightful thoughts.
Comment from Sandra du Plessis
A very well-written peppered pickle about wild catlike animals can be extremely dangerous for humans when we come in close contact with them by accident. Very little people can tell about getting away.
reply by the author on 28-Nov-2020
A very well-written peppered pickle about wild catlike animals can be extremely dangerous for humans when we come in close contact with them by accident. Very little people can tell about getting away.
Comment Written 28-Nov-2020
reply by the author on 28-Nov-2020
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Thank you!
Comment from Cynthia Adams1
I like your poem. I'm not that familiar with the peppered pickle. I like yours the best of the ones I've read in the style.
The poem has good imagery and holds together well.
The artwork is magnificent and a little scary :)
Nice job.
reply by the author on 28-Nov-2020
I like your poem. I'm not that familiar with the peppered pickle. I like yours the best of the ones I've read in the style.
The poem has good imagery and holds together well.
The artwork is magnificent and a little scary :)
Nice job.
Comment Written 28-Nov-2020
reply by the author on 28-Nov-2020
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Thank you!
Comment from Gloria ....
Well this is just a perfect peppered pickled, in every way, from the carefully chosen artwork to the sublime iambic tetrameter and metre.
The message of course spot on. Negativity attracts a bad attitude.
Superb poem indeed. :))
Gloria
reply by the author on 27-Nov-2020
Well this is just a perfect peppered pickled, in every way, from the carefully chosen artwork to the sublime iambic tetrameter and metre.
The message of course spot on. Negativity attracts a bad attitude.
Superb poem indeed. :))
Gloria
Comment Written 27-Nov-2020
reply by the author on 27-Nov-2020
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Thank you so much for the positive feedback and generous rating! So glad you enjoyed this peppered pickle!
Comment from Irish Rain
Well, this is certainly true!
And the only people that truly
suffer are ourselves.
So very much easier to just let
it go, and be happy!!
This is so cute!
Blessings...
reply by the author on 27-Nov-2020
Well, this is certainly true!
And the only people that truly
suffer are ourselves.
So very much easier to just let
it go, and be happy!!
This is so cute!
Blessings...
Comment Written 27-Nov-2020
reply by the author on 27-Nov-2020
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Thank you so much!
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Have a great weekend!!
Comment from Sugarray77
This is soooo good and seems to echo reality ;). Your tongue-in-cheek humor is perfect and you easily get your message across. Way to go on crafting a perfect peppered pickle... wish I had a six for you!!
Melissa
reply by the author on 27-Nov-2020
This is soooo good and seems to echo reality ;). Your tongue-in-cheek humor is perfect and you easily get your message across. Way to go on crafting a perfect peppered pickle... wish I had a six for you!!
Melissa
Comment Written 27-Nov-2020
reply by the author on 27-Nov-2020
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Glad you enjoyed this one!
Comment from Gypsy Blue Rose
Catitude
by June Sargent
Hello, June,
Great peppered pickle poem about spite. It's a negative emotion that creates distance between people. I love the presentation. Well done, June.
reply by the author on 27-Nov-2020
Catitude
by June Sargent
Hello, June,
Great peppered pickle poem about spite. It's a negative emotion that creates distance between people. I love the presentation. Well done, June.
Comment Written 27-Nov-2020
reply by the author on 27-Nov-2020
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Glad you enjoyed this one!
Comment from lyenochka
Great job with Dolly's peppered pickle form! And a great message for these times as the social media airwaves have been so full of spite due to the divisive leadership. I like how you point out the negative in red!
reply by the author on 27-Nov-2020
Great job with Dolly's peppered pickle form! And a great message for these times as the social media airwaves have been so full of spite due to the divisive leadership. I like how you point out the negative in red!
Comment Written 27-Nov-2020
reply by the author on 27-Nov-2020
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Glad you enjoyed this one!