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Catitude

A peppered pickle poem

14 total reviews 
Comment from dragonpoet
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June,
This followed the form well and gave a suncinct definition of spite and what it causes. You can say bite and grace are also actions of a cat.
Interesting arwork.
Keep writing and stay healthy.
Joan

 Comment Written 28-Nov-2020


reply by the author on 28-Nov-2020
    Thank you so much!
reply by dragonpoet on 29-Nov-2020
    You are most kindly welcome, June
    Joan
Comment from robyn corum
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June,

You know, I can see you acting like a cat if anyone could ever anger you. I get that from this poem and your cool profile pic. That's weird, isn't it?

The poem was fun and clever in so many ways. I enjoyed the addition of the colored fonts here and there so we'd get more of your fun. Thanks!

 Comment Written 28-Nov-2020


reply by the author on 28-Nov-2020
    Yes, I am that crazy cat lady - in more ways than one! Thanks for dropping by to read and review! Always appreciate your input.
Comment from damommy
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A good attitude is so important in life. I think it's 99% of how you feel and how you take what happens around you. You've written a delightful pepper pickle about this. Well done.

 Comment Written 28-Nov-2020


reply by the author on 28-Nov-2020
    You are so right! We get what we give in life. Thank you for sharing your insightful thoughts.
Comment from Sandra du Plessis
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A very well-written peppered pickle about wild catlike animals can be extremely dangerous for humans when we come in close contact with them by accident. Very little people can tell about getting away.

 Comment Written 28-Nov-2020


reply by the author on 28-Nov-2020
    Thank you!
Comment from Cynthia Adams1
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I like your poem. I'm not that familiar with the peppered pickle. I like yours the best of the ones I've read in the style.
The poem has good imagery and holds together well.
The artwork is magnificent and a little scary :)
Nice job.

 Comment Written 28-Nov-2020


reply by the author on 28-Nov-2020
    Thank you!
Comment from Gloria ....
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Well this is just a perfect peppered pickled, in every way, from the carefully chosen artwork to the sublime iambic tetrameter and metre.

The message of course spot on. Negativity attracts a bad attitude.

Superb poem indeed. :))

Gloria

 Comment Written 27-Nov-2020


reply by the author on 27-Nov-2020
    Thank you so much for the positive feedback and generous rating! So glad you enjoyed this peppered pickle!
Comment from Irish Rain
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Well, this is certainly true!
And the only people that truly
suffer are ourselves.
So very much easier to just let
it go, and be happy!!
This is so cute!
Blessings...

 Comment Written 27-Nov-2020


reply by the author on 27-Nov-2020
    Thank you so much!
reply by Irish Rain on 28-Nov-2020
    Have a great weekend!!
Comment from Sugarray77
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This is soooo good and seems to echo reality ;). Your tongue-in-cheek humor is perfect and you easily get your message across. Way to go on crafting a perfect peppered pickle... wish I had a six for you!!

Melissa

 Comment Written 27-Nov-2020


reply by the author on 27-Nov-2020
    Glad you enjoyed this one!
Comment from Gypsy Blue Rose
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Catitude
by June Sargent

Hello, June,

Great peppered pickle poem about spite. It's a negative emotion that creates distance between people. I love the presentation. Well done, June.

 Comment Written 27-Nov-2020


reply by the author on 27-Nov-2020
    Glad you enjoyed this one!
Comment from lyenochka
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Great job with Dolly's peppered pickle form! And a great message for these times as the social media airwaves have been so full of spite due to the divisive leadership. I like how you point out the negative in red!

 Comment Written 27-Nov-2020


reply by the author on 27-Nov-2020
    Glad you enjoyed this one!