Mosey On
Like having a genie to make the change see notes3 total reviews
Comment from poetwatch
Ah, yes, Lulube I can see that your imagination is wild. :) I can see the face and it's really getting down. It looks like it wants to choke that clown. Still, it looks like the genie has left the building. I guess it fizzled out. Thank you for sharing your imagination in a cloud. :)
reply by the author on 28-Nov-2020
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Ah, yes, Lulube I can see that your imagination is wild. :) I can see the face and it's really getting down. It looks like it wants to choke that clown. Still, it looks like the genie has left the building. I guess it fizzled out. Thank you for sharing your imagination in a cloud. :)
Comment Written 27-Nov-2020
reply by the author on 28-Nov-2020
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lol I love the hand, it's so real looking, only up there. lol thxs for your review.
lulube
Comment from Pantygynt
I thought this quite clever. But did you mosey on? Or did you, like many, hope against hope that things would improve and so hang on in there? That is when it can get nasty. Probably better to cut and run early on.
reply by the author on 27-Nov-2020
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I thought this quite clever. But did you mosey on? Or did you, like many, hope against hope that things would improve and so hang on in there? That is when it can get nasty. Probably better to cut and run early on.
Comment Written 27-Nov-2020
reply by the author on 27-Nov-2020
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lol I'm not going anywhere. lol thxs for your great comments, glad you liked it
lulube
Comment from Susan X Smith
I did appreciate the whimsical aspect of this poem, as well as the alliteration. Until I read the note, I had no idea it was about a relationship. I enjoyed reading it.
reply by the author on 27-Nov-2020
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I did appreciate the whimsical aspect of this poem, as well as the alliteration. Until I read the note, I had no idea it was about a relationship. I enjoyed reading it.
Comment Written 27-Nov-2020
reply by the author on 27-Nov-2020
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yes it was pretty vague, hence the notes. thxs for your review
lulube
