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Comment from
wishawave
I feel like I am losing the logic reading the poem. Are we on the path or are we straying? Are we still in the past or are we facing what is coming? Maybe it is a good thing to lose the logic, then we can rely fully on our heart. It leads to the perfection when we lose ourselves fully in love.
Comment Written 26-Nov-2020
reply by the author on 09-Dec-2020
They say Dr Spock was the most logical when it comes to Star trek fans.
Which of course is quite Spocktologically, Spotological, logically, logical.
Which is quite enterprising.
Only if you are James T. Kirk of the starship "Enterprise!"
Doctor Ricky
Comment from
Mary Kay Bonfante
It is good to have a God-ordained union with our spouse, one that is Heaven-sent, it certainly is, and on this Thanksgiving Day, I can attest that it is certainly something to be grateful for.
As for our relationship with God the Father and Our Lord Jesus Christ, we always want to stay on that path with Him, and the perfection He seeks from us, is perfection of the heart. It is a perfection that can only come from Him, and in dependence upon His grace. Amen! God bless you, my friend, Doc Ricky.
Comment Written 26-Nov-2020
reply by the author on 09-Dec-2020
Thank you for this Mary!
Ricky
reply by Mary Kay Bonfante on 10-Dec-2020
You're very welcome, Ricky, my friend.
- Mary Kay
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