A Slight Underestimation
A modified Pantygynt poem30 total reviews
Comment from Miss Cookie Atkinson
I love the words to your poem You captured my In fact not only was it funny but a interesting piece
They are a perfect match.
hank you for sharing
Cookie
reply by the author on 30-Nov-2020
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I love the words to your poem You captured my In fact not only was it funny but a interesting piece
They are a perfect match.
hank you for sharing
Cookie
Comment Written 30-Nov-2020
reply by the author on 30-Nov-2020
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Thank you for this wonderful review and the stars!
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Your very welcome. stay safe and blessed.
Cookie
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You, too.
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Until next time, take care.
Cookie
Comment from Julie Sandy
Great poem well structured with a good rhyme also.
It was very fun one to read, I enjoyed the story of it.
I like the picture to go with it, thanks for sharing
reply by the author on 26-Nov-2020
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Great poem well structured with a good rhyme also.
It was very fun one to read, I enjoyed the story of it.
I like the picture to go with it, thanks for sharing
Comment Written 26-Nov-2020
reply by the author on 26-Nov-2020
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Thanks for a great review.
Comment from Eternal Muse
What a great form, and I think you've done it flawlessly. Excellent use of iambic tetrameter throughout. I loved the creative imagery and a light humor.
Excellent presentation and artwork.
Thank you for sharing.
reply by the author on 26-Nov-2020
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What a great form, and I think you've done it flawlessly. Excellent use of iambic tetrameter throughout. I loved the creative imagery and a light humor.
Excellent presentation and artwork.
Thank you for sharing.
Comment Written 26-Nov-2020
reply by the author on 26-Nov-2020
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Thank you for reviewing. Glad you liked it.
Comment from Gypsy Blue Rose
A Slight Underestimation
by damommy
Fine modified Pantygynt poem for the Club entry for the "Before and After" event in "The Fabulous Free Versers Club. Your poem is so cute and true. The early bird gets the worm. Getting someplace early gives time to settle in peace. Well done.
reply by the author on 25-Nov-2020
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A Slight Underestimation
by damommy
Fine modified Pantygynt poem for the Club entry for the "Before and After" event in "The Fabulous Free Versers Club. Your poem is so cute and true. The early bird gets the worm. Getting someplace early gives time to settle in peace. Well done.
Comment Written 25-Nov-2020
reply by the author on 25-Nov-2020
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I'm not sure who won this time. Last I heard, the worm had the bird stuck in the hole. hahahaha. Thanks for reviewing.
Comment from joycetreasures
Hello Dolly,
I hope you are doing well. This is such a good message poem about knowing your opponent. We should never underestimate your rival. That's a skinny bird which is bigger than a worm. However, that worm was very stronger than the bird thought and really determine. ha ha. Yes, that was quite an underestimation on the part of the bird. This is a cute poem and great imagery. Great message, Dolly. Nicely written.
reply by the author on 25-Nov-2020
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Hello Dolly,
I hope you are doing well. This is such a good message poem about knowing your opponent. We should never underestimate your rival. That's a skinny bird which is bigger than a worm. However, that worm was very stronger than the bird thought and really determine. ha ha. Yes, that was quite an underestimation on the part of the bird. This is a cute poem and great imagery. Great message, Dolly. Nicely written.
Comment Written 25-Nov-2020
reply by the author on 25-Nov-2020
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Thank you so much for this.
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You are very welcome.
Comment from Ulla
Oh dear, Yvonne, this sounds pretty ominous. It appears that you lost that final battle and are now finding yourself pulled into a dark hole. not a nice situation to be in. at all! Your poem made me smile. Ulla:)))
reply by the author on 25-Nov-2020
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Oh dear, Yvonne, this sounds pretty ominous. It appears that you lost that final battle and are now finding yourself pulled into a dark hole. not a nice situation to be in. at all! Your poem made me smile. Ulla:)))
Comment Written 25-Nov-2020
reply by the author on 25-Nov-2020
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I'm glad it gave you a smile. Thanks so much.
Comment from Pantygynt
I think you should call this a 'damommification' - a new form of your own - and it works well in this amusing story of the worm that turned and the illustration is really very apt. Great fun.
reply by the author on 25-Nov-2020
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I think you should call this a 'damommification' - a new form of your own - and it works well in this amusing story of the worm that turned and the illustration is really very apt. Great fun.
Comment Written 25-Nov-2020
reply by the author on 25-Nov-2020
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Thank you. I don't know about giving it my name. Probably no one would try writing one.
Comment from Father Flaps
Hi Yvonne,
I really enjoyed your story poem, especially the verses with lines of 8-8-8-6 syllables... verses 2,3,4 and 6.
And you have some fine humor, too. The worm is so strong, it pulled the little bird into the hole... thus the artwork! That's pretty cute.
Is there a hidden meaning here? Do we set our goals too high at times, perhaps? When do we let go?
Nicely penned! Thanks for sharing.
Cheers,
Kimbob
reply by the author on 25-Nov-2020
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Hi Yvonne,
I really enjoyed your story poem, especially the verses with lines of 8-8-8-6 syllables... verses 2,3,4 and 6.
And you have some fine humor, too. The worm is so strong, it pulled the little bird into the hole... thus the artwork! That's pretty cute.
Is there a hidden meaning here? Do we set our goals too high at times, perhaps? When do we let go?
Nicely penned! Thanks for sharing.
Cheers,
Kimbob
Comment Written 25-Nov-2020
reply by the author on 25-Nov-2020
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No, no hidden meaning. Just me being silly. Thanks for a delightful review.
Comment from Jannypan (Jan)
Your poem is awesome, Yvonne. The flow is natural as are the rhymes. The story is told well. I could see everything mentioned because of the vivid details used. There is great pacing and an unexpected ending although you gave hints along the way that this would not be an ordinary fight. You set the scene well and followed through to the end with great imagery. The image is perfect--at least for the worm. Thanks for sharing a fun poem.
Respectfully, Jan
reply by the author on 25-Nov-2020
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Your poem is awesome, Yvonne. The flow is natural as are the rhymes. The story is told well. I could see everything mentioned because of the vivid details used. There is great pacing and an unexpected ending although you gave hints along the way that this would not be an ordinary fight. You set the scene well and followed through to the end with great imagery. The image is perfect--at least for the worm. Thanks for sharing a fun poem.
Respectfully, Jan
Comment Written 25-Nov-2020
reply by the author on 25-Nov-2020
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Thank you for an awesome review and stars. I couldn't resist that picture.
Comment from Sandra du Plessis
A very well-written modified Pantygynt poem. I also sometimes find when I get up extra early to get more done, I actually do less because of unforseen distractions.
reply by the author on 25-Nov-2020
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A very well-written modified Pantygynt poem. I also sometimes find when I get up extra early to get more done, I actually do less because of unforseen distractions.
Comment Written 25-Nov-2020
reply by the author on 25-Nov-2020
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That is so true. Seems there's never enough time. I often wonder how I got everything when I was working.
