Faux Fur
finch in trouble . . .16 total reviews
Comment from Mark D. R.
Almost a perfect flatter alliteration for your 2-4-2. Too bad 'ferret' is two syllables. Does a fox have the same problem with a skunk? LOL
'faux fur' is a great use of your language!
best wishes in the contest voting
reply by the author on 29-Dec-2020
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Almost a perfect flatter alliteration for your 2-4-2. Too bad 'ferret' is two syllables. Does a fox have the same problem with a skunk? LOL
'faux fur' is a great use of your language!
best wishes in the contest voting
Comment Written 04-Dec-2020
reply by the author on 29-Dec-2020
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Hello,
thanks for stopping by
Happy Holidays
- Lobber
Comment from LeftHandedScribe
This is delightful! What a clever convention to create this relationship. You introduce two characters in such a brief amount of words. Good use of humor as well!
reply by the author on 29-Dec-2020
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This is delightful! What a clever convention to create this relationship. You introduce two characters in such a brief amount of words. Good use of humor as well!
Comment Written 01-Dec-2020
reply by the author on 29-Dec-2020
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Hello,
thanks for stopping by
Happy Holidays
- Lobber
Comment from Susan X Smith
This is a very cute piece and it is an appropriate entry for the contest. I love the alliteration and the pictures are a fitting complement to the poem. Good luck in the voting.
reply by the author on 29-Dec-2020
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This is a very cute piece and it is an appropriate entry for the contest. I love the alliteration and the pictures are a fitting complement to the poem. Good luck in the voting.
Comment Written 01-Dec-2020
reply by the author on 29-Dec-2020
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Hello,
thanks for stopping by
Happy Holidays
- Lobber
Comment from Jay Squires
This is such a clever and humorous 2-4-2, lobber. You employed alliteration so well, too. Betcha wish there was an "f" somewhere in skunk. This should gather a lot of judges' eyes. Good luck in the contest.
reply by the author on 29-Dec-2020
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This is such a clever and humorous 2-4-2, lobber. You employed alliteration so well, too. Betcha wish there was an "f" somewhere in skunk. This should gather a lot of judges' eyes. Good luck in the contest.
Comment Written 01-Dec-2020
reply by the author on 29-Dec-2020
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Hello,
thanks for stopping by
Happy Holidays
- Lobber
Comment from Sandra du Plessis
A very well-written 2-4-2 poem about the Finch that fears the skunk's fake feathers on display he only has it to fool the unaware prey he is after.
reply by the author on 29-Dec-2020
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A very well-written 2-4-2 poem about the Finch that fears the skunk's fake feathers on display he only has it to fool the unaware prey he is after.
Comment Written 26-Nov-2020
reply by the author on 29-Dec-2020
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Hello,
thanks for stopping by
Happy Holidays
- Lobber
Comment from Eternal Muse
Oh, I am so sorry for the poor finch - I didn't realize there are so many predators out there to hunt them! Fantastic pictures and presentation; thank you for your links and notes.
This should make a brilliant entry into that contest; good luck in the booths.
reply by the author on 29-Dec-2020
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Oh, I am so sorry for the poor finch - I didn't realize there are so many predators out there to hunt them! Fantastic pictures and presentation; thank you for your links and notes.
This should make a brilliant entry into that contest; good luck in the booths.
Comment Written 26-Nov-2020
reply by the author on 29-Dec-2020
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Hello,
thanks for stopping by
Happy Holidays
- Lobber
Comment from djsaxon
Great 2/4/2. An allit fest ð??? Australia is blessed with a great range of finches but thankfully, no skunks or native squirrels. Sadly, something like 5 million feral cats. DJ
reply by the author on 29-Dec-2020
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Great 2/4/2. An allit fest ð??? Australia is blessed with a great range of finches but thankfully, no skunks or native squirrels. Sadly, something like 5 million feral cats. DJ
Comment Written 25-Nov-2020
reply by the author on 29-Dec-2020
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hello,
with 5 mil wild felines surprised you have any birds!
- J
Comment from royowen
We only have domestic cats, but it's the feral ones that do more damage, they wreak a lot of havoc, this is an excellent entry in this 2/4/2 poetry contest, well done, good luck, blessings Roy
reply by the author on 29-Dec-2020
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We only have domestic cats, but it's the feral ones that do more damage, they wreak a lot of havoc, this is an excellent entry in this 2/4/2 poetry contest, well done, good luck, blessings Roy
Comment Written 25-Nov-2020
reply by the author on 29-Dec-2020
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Hello,
thanks for stopping by
Happy Holidays
- Lobber
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Welcome
Comment from roof35
I did not know squirrels and skunks are predators of birds. The squirrels in my back yard don't seem to bother the birds except for eating their seed. Your illustrations are great. Nicely done.
reply by the author on 26-Nov-2020
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I did not know squirrels and skunks are predators of birds. The squirrels in my back yard don't seem to bother the birds except for eating their seed. Your illustrations are great. Nicely done.
Comment Written 24-Nov-2020
reply by the author on 26-Nov-2020
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hi there,
thnx for stopping by. Shunks also like to eat the following:
Insects
Frogs and toads
Birds and other eggs
poultry for their eggs
Earthworms
Grubs
Snakes
Other small animals
bees
Berries
Edible leaves
Nutritious grasses
Plant roots
Nuts
Corn
Grapes
Cherries
Other berries
They are quite clever as to how they obtain bees at their hive.
- Lobber
Comment from donette1914
very creative
well chosen words to compliment your work
very believable and thought out
nice photo that goes well with your well penned work
thank you for sharing it was a pleasure
I hope for the best in the contest
reply by the author on 29-Dec-2020
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very creative
well chosen words to compliment your work
very believable and thought out
nice photo that goes well with your well penned work
thank you for sharing it was a pleasure
I hope for the best in the contest
Comment Written 24-Nov-2020
reply by the author on 29-Dec-2020
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Hello,
thanks for stopping by
Happy Holidays
- Lobber
