Comment from Mistydawn

Exceptional

What a great follow-up from your previous chapter. It really brought Tess and Jace to light, let the readers get to know them better. See the love, the heated passion they have for each other. Your ending was perfect. I'm sure the others will understand. I have a feeling a few comments might be made. Your chapter is very well-written, interesting, realistic. I look forward to reading more.

 Comment Written 25-Nov-2020

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reply by the author on 27-Nov-2020

Thanks so much, Mistydawn :)

Tessa and Jace are my favorite characters. They are the two that started my story and continue to bring out the passion in each other's characters. I also love the fact that he loves her even though she's 10 years older, although she stopped aging at 36. I used to dream of a lover like Jace. At least I can make up a story and keep wishing. LOL!
Thanks again for your awesome review and encouraging feedback.
Have a wonderful weekend my friend.

Hugs,
Shana :)

Comment from royowen

Exceptional

I love the romantic that you are, even tending business, that's the most important thing to you isn't it? It's the idealistic forever love that has eternal overtones to it. I believe the same thing. But in this world, it's pretty rare. So now the Jena escapade has filtered back to the covenant leadership, and something needs to be sorted out. A wonderfully warm post. Great personal comments, as if in the mind of this fabulous characters, Well done, Shana, exceptional, post, blessings Roy

 Comment Written 24-Nov-2020

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reply by the author on 25-Nov-2020

Thank you, Roy :)

Your opinion means a great deal to me. I do love romance and yes, it is rare. I think if you find love, you should hold it dear to your heart. I think writing romance between my characters gives me a sense of hope that love is real.
Thanks so much for the great review. I wish you and your family a wonderful holiday.
Always your fan,
Shana :)

reply by royowen on 25-Nov-2020

Well done dear girl

Comment from robyn corum

Excellent

Shana,

This was a great chapter describing the relationship between this couple. I love LOVE! hahaha And I especially love guys who have found their love and are happy to build their lives around them..

I enjoyed!

 Comment Written 24-Nov-2020

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reply by the author on 25-Nov-2020

Thank you, Robyn :)

Glad you enjoyed the romance between Jace and Tessa. They have been down a long road, but no matter what gets in their way, love conquers all.

Thanks again! Wishing you and your family a wonderful holiday!
Sincerely,
Shana :)

Comment from fm wright

Exceptional

Definitely a Valentine's to remember: romantic for one couple and bloody for others, though I'm sure the woman and her daughter are glad that it turned out in their favor. I like the contrast. Also your pictures nicely compliment your writing. Well done.

 Comment Written 24-Nov-2020

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reply by the author on 25-Nov-2020

Thanks so much, Faye :)

Yes, it was a romantic Valentine's for one and a little messy for some others. Thanks for mentioning the artwork. Sometimes it's a difficult to find something that will go with each chapter.

I do enjoy hearing your feedback. Thanks for your support! Have a wonderful holiday!

Hugs,
Shana :)

reply by fm wright on 25-Nov-2020

You did an excellent job on fitting your artwork selection with the contents of this chapter's storyline.
Hugs,
Faye

Comment from Alcreator Litt Dear

Excellent

I like and have enjoyed the realistic taletelling and perfectly blended contributory dialogues with catchy beginning and romantic ending; well said, well done; thanks for sharing this. ALCREATOR

 Comment Written 24-Nov-2020

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reply by the author on 25-Nov-2020

Thanks so much, Alcreator :)

It's good to hear from you. I always enjoy reading your feedback.

Wishing you and your family a wonderful holiday!
Sincerely,
Shana :)

Comment from AnnieDawn

Excellent

This was a very nice chapter to read and I was unable to find any areas that need correction or adjustment. Well written and good basic content. I enjoyed it. The list of characters at the end of the chapter is very helpful. Great job.

 Comment Written 24-Nov-2020

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reply by the author on 25-Nov-2020

Thank you, AnnieDawn :)

So glad you enjoyed the chapter. It's nice to get feedback. Your kind words are greatly appreciated. Hope to hear from you again.

Have a wonderful holiday!
Sincerely,
Shana :)