Life
She makes loving her easy.5 total reviews
Comment from sammielwf
Harry,
Congratulations on your second place finish. Spouses everywhere are applauding your heartfelt write. With just a few little words- you were able to convey respect, love and sweetness.
Sammielwf
reply by the author on 28-Nov-2020
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Harry,
Congratulations on your second place finish. Spouses everywhere are applauding your heartfelt write. With just a few little words- you were able to convey respect, love and sweetness.
Sammielwf
Comment Written 28-Nov-2020
reply by the author on 28-Nov-2020
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Thank you for the congratulations. Much appreciated.
Comment from lyenochka
Simple and sweet! Great use of the required end rhymes. The final word is key to the rest of the poem which gives a recipe for a happy married life. Best wishes in the contest!
reply by the author on 26-Nov-2020
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Simple and sweet! Great use of the required end rhymes. The final word is key to the rest of the poem which gives a recipe for a happy married life. Best wishes in the contest!
Comment Written 26-Nov-2020
reply by the author on 26-Nov-2020
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Thank you for your read and review.
Comment from l.raven
I love your poem...and love the meaning...
you love unconditional...very nicely
written...and the perfect picture...Love Linda xxoo
reply by the author on 26-Nov-2020
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I love your poem...and love the meaning...
you love unconditional...very nicely
written...and the perfect picture...Love Linda xxoo
Comment Written 26-Nov-2020
reply by the author on 26-Nov-2020
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Thank you, my dear, for your encouraging review.
Comment from kiwisteveh
You have used the brief form of the 1-6-1 poem to pen a fine tribute to a wife.
I can tell you from 46 years experience that the 'without strife' part of your poem is unlikely to be borne out in reality, but then, what do poems have to do with reality?!
Good look in the contest.
Steve
reply by the author on 23-Nov-2020
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You have used the brief form of the 1-6-1 poem to pen a fine tribute to a wife.
I can tell you from 46 years experience that the 'without strife' part of your poem is unlikely to be borne out in reality, but then, what do poems have to do with reality?!
Good look in the contest.
Steve
Comment Written 23-Nov-2020
reply by the author on 23-Nov-2020
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Yes, you are quite right. But I took poetic license with this one. Thanks for the read and review.
Comment from robyn corum
Dear Mystery Poet,
Aaawwwwww.... I know! This is really my hubby, right? You've made an account on here and you just wanted to show how much you ADORE me by creating this magical post. --sigh--
NOT.
I think this is a marvelous post and a wonderfully romantic piece. If you haven't shown it to her yet, please let your wife see this as soon as possible. This is wonderful. I haven't seen a lot of these entries yet, but I feel like yours will be in the top. Good luck!
reply by the author on 23-Nov-2020
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Dear Mystery Poet,
Aaawwwwww.... I know! This is really my hubby, right? You've made an account on here and you just wanted to show how much you ADORE me by creating this magical post. --sigh--
NOT.
I think this is a marvelous post and a wonderfully romantic piece. If you haven't shown it to her yet, please let your wife see this as soon as possible. This is wonderful. I haven't seen a lot of these entries yet, but I feel like yours will be in the top. Good luck!
Comment Written 23-Nov-2020
reply by the author on 23-Nov-2020
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While thank you, Robin. I'm sure your hubby thinks if does not say it.
Thanks for the read and comments.
