Dawn
A 1-6-1 about sunrise.3 total reviews
Comment from zanya
Yes the prompt for the 1-6-1 poetry contest is so effectively worked out here, complete with rhythm - just how we may feel as dawn breaks over a new day
reply by the author on 24-Nov-2020
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Yes the prompt for the 1-6-1 poetry contest is so effectively worked out here, complete with rhythm - just how we may feel as dawn breaks over a new day
Comment Written 23-Nov-2020
reply by the author on 24-Nov-2020
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Thank you. I am deeply moved by all the stars. Truly appreciated.
Comment from Jay Squires
And I bet you thought, "That couldn't be too hard--1 syllable, 6 syllables, 1 syllable, everything rhyming." Yeah, sure. Piece of cake. Haha! Well, you did it with this piece. congratulations. I've felt just that after a long night of insomnia. The "Yawn" was a perfect ending.
reply by the author on 24-Nov-2020
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And I bet you thought, "That couldn't be too hard--1 syllable, 6 syllables, 1 syllable, everything rhyming." Yeah, sure. Piece of cake. Haha! Well, you did it with this piece. congratulations. I've felt just that after a long night of insomnia. The "Yawn" was a perfect ending.
Comment Written 23-Nov-2020
reply by the author on 24-Nov-2020
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Thank you ever so much for your comments. Your review is much appreciated.
Comment from Anne Johnston
You tell a great story in just a few words. You woke up thinking the night had been too short and still wish to slip back into bed. I am sure a lot of people feel that way.
reply by the author on 24-Nov-2020
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You tell a great story in just a few words. You woke up thinking the night had been too short and still wish to slip back into bed. I am sure a lot of people feel that way.
Comment Written 23-Nov-2020
reply by the author on 24-Nov-2020
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Thank you ever so much for your comments. Your review is most appreciated.
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You are welcome
