Reprieve
Heavy sighs.18 total reviews
Comment from Wendy G
Clever little piece. Maybe the humans are too. Unfortunately for the turkeys, they still get caught and eaten. I like the accompanying photo. I wish you well with your entry in the contest.
reply by the author on 24-Nov-2020
Clever little piece. Maybe the humans are too. Unfortunately for the turkeys, they still get caught and eaten. I like the accompanying photo. I wish you well with your entry in the contest.
Comment Written 24-Nov-2020
reply by the author on 24-Nov-2020
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Thank you for your review.
Comment from zanya
Ah-h this is a great play on the new and strange activities that have dominated our lives this year - even our feathered friends are following suit -thanks for sharing
reply by the author on 23-Nov-2020
Ah-h this is a great play on the new and strange activities that have dominated our lives this year - even our feathered friends are following suit -thanks for sharing
Comment Written 23-Nov-2020
reply by the author on 23-Nov-2020
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Thanks for your wonderful review.
Comment from Michael Ludwinder
Thanks for the laugh! I thought this was perfect! You make light of the current situation (which is well needed) and also bring the holidays into it. Very creative and enjoyable.
reply by the author on 23-Nov-2020
Thanks for the laugh! I thought this was perfect! You make light of the current situation (which is well needed) and also bring the holidays into it. Very creative and enjoyable.
Comment Written 23-Nov-2020
reply by the author on 23-Nov-2020
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Thank you for your wonderful review.
Comment from kiwisteveh
Your wee Thanksgiving poem gave me a chuckle, even though we don't celebrate that day in this part of the world. You have cleverly woven in the idea of social distancing - a phrase that few of us were familiar with this time last year.
Good luck.
Steve
reply by the author on 23-Nov-2020
Your wee Thanksgiving poem gave me a chuckle, even though we don't celebrate that day in this part of the world. You have cleverly woven in the idea of social distancing - a phrase that few of us were familiar with this time last year.
Good luck.
Steve
Comment Written 23-Nov-2020
reply by the author on 23-Nov-2020
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Thank you so much for your review.
Comment from Sandra du Plessis
A very well-written two-line poem about the turkeys that decide it will be safer to follow the social distancing rules this year and hopefully being saved for another year.
reply by the author on 23-Nov-2020
A very well-written two-line poem about the turkeys that decide it will be safer to follow the social distancing rules this year and hopefully being saved for another year.
Comment Written 23-Nov-2020
reply by the author on 23-Nov-2020
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Thank you for your review.
Comment from Anne Johnston
I love it. I am sure there are a lot of happy turkeys out there this year, as people will be celebrating in a different way. I like the way you have expressed this thought.
reply by the author on 23-Nov-2020
I love it. I am sure there are a lot of happy turkeys out there this year, as people will be celebrating in a different way. I like the way you have expressed this thought.
Comment Written 23-Nov-2020
reply by the author on 23-Nov-2020
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Thank you for your encouraging review.
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Happy Thanksgiving
Comment from donette1914
this is so very cute and so very true
your words have a good meaning to enhance your well pinned poem
the photo went perfect to make this come a live
believable and you have so much talent
it was a pleasure to read your work
thank you for sharing
I hope the best in the contest
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reply by the author on 23-Nov-2020
this is so very cute and so very true
your words have a good meaning to enhance your well pinned poem
the photo went perfect to make this come a live
believable and you have so much talent
it was a pleasure to read your work
thank you for sharing
I hope the best in the contest
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Comment Written 23-Nov-2020
reply by the author on 23-Nov-2020
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Thank you so much your review means so much.
Comment from robyn corum
Carolyn,
If those turkeys were really smart, they would social distance from humans! hahaha The danger isn't with other critters on the yard, it's with that guy holding the ax. hahaha
Thanks and good luck!
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reply by the author on 23-Nov-2020
Carolyn,
If those turkeys were really smart, they would social distance from humans! hahaha The danger isn't with other critters on the yard, it's with that guy holding the ax. hahaha
Thanks and good luck!
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Comment Written 23-Nov-2020
reply by the author on 23-Nov-2020
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Very true, thank you for your insightful review.