I'm Sorry
Hard to Build...Easy to Lose14 total reviews
Comment from jaded831
Your poem packs power, truth and is an excellent entry for the six word poetry contest. Once trust in a relationship dies, the relationship is over. Great insight, I must read them all before voting, but so far I believe you're the winner.
reply by the author on 23-Nov-2020
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Your poem packs power, truth and is an excellent entry for the six word poetry contest. Once trust in a relationship dies, the relationship is over. Great insight, I must read them all before voting, but so far I believe you're the winner.
Comment Written 23-Nov-2020
reply by the author on 23-Nov-2020
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Thank you.
Comment from sammielwf
Dear Mystery Writer,
Your piece " I'm Sorry" is oh so powerful. It was simple, clear and poignant. To tell you how much I liked it- I have an entry in this contest and I defer to you. Your piece is the best.
reply by the author on 23-Nov-2020
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Dear Mystery Writer,
Your piece " I'm Sorry" is oh so powerful. It was simple, clear and poignant. To tell you how much I liked it- I have an entry in this contest and I defer to you. Your piece is the best.
Comment Written 22-Nov-2020
reply by the author on 23-Nov-2020
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Thank you very much.
Comment from Gypsy Blue Rose
Hello, anonymous,
Great entry for the Six Word Poetry Contest. Good word count. It flows well. Good connection between lines.
..once trust is lost is hard to gain it back.
Good luck !
Gypsy
reply by the author on 22-Nov-2020
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Hello, anonymous,
Great entry for the Six Word Poetry Contest. Good word count. It flows well. Good connection between lines.
..once trust is lost is hard to gain it back.
Good luck !
Gypsy
Comment Written 22-Nov-2020
reply by the author on 22-Nov-2020
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Thank you very much
Comment from Cynthia Adams1
Great job on your six-word poem.
Everyone over 12 can identify with this. It is the human experience summed up in only a few words. The artwork is a perfect accompaniment.
Looks like a contest winner to me. I don't think you could have done it better, hence the six stars. Good luck.
reply by the author on 22-Nov-2020
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Great job on your six-word poem.
Everyone over 12 can identify with this. It is the human experience summed up in only a few words. The artwork is a perfect accompaniment.
Looks like a contest winner to me. I don't think you could have done it better, hence the six stars. Good luck.
Comment Written 22-Nov-2020
reply by the author on 22-Nov-2020
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Thank you very much.
Comment from Ann Market
Wow. This poem really does capture that feeling! The black and white picture you paired it with captures that desperate desire for it to have never happened.
Good luck to you in the contest!
reply by the author on 22-Nov-2020
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Wow. This poem really does capture that feeling! The black and white picture you paired it with captures that desperate desire for it to have never happened.
Good luck to you in the contest!
Comment Written 22-Nov-2020
reply by the author on 22-Nov-2020
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Thank you very much
Comment from l.raven
that pretty much exactly how it works...
when you lie to someone...trust in them
is pretty much gone...and if you stay with them...
you always wonder...very well written...and your picture
says it all...love Linda xxoo
reply by the author on 22-Nov-2020
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that pretty much exactly how it works...
when you lie to someone...trust in them
is pretty much gone...and if you stay with them...
you always wonder...very well written...and your picture
says it all...love Linda xxoo
Comment Written 22-Nov-2020
reply by the author on 22-Nov-2020
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Thank you very much
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your so welcome...very well thought of...
love xxoo
Comment from Rosemary Everson1
Like your words. How true an experience like this can be.....you lied, I cried, trust died. I guess when a person lies, it does make a person cry and you'll never trust that person again.
reply by the author on 22-Nov-2020
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Like your words. How true an experience like this can be.....you lied, I cried, trust died. I guess when a person lies, it does make a person cry and you'll never trust that person again.
Comment Written 22-Nov-2020
reply by the author on 22-Nov-2020
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Thank you very much
Comment from Goodadvicechan
That is the truth. Unfortunately many lie and people get hurt. Even in today's world. Our president lies and thousands of Americans die of Covid. There is no forgiveness for this lie. It is a shame and disgrace in America for having such a lying president.
reply by the author on 22-Nov-2020
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That is the truth. Unfortunately many lie and people get hurt. Even in today's world. Our president lies and thousands of Americans die of Covid. There is no forgiveness for this lie. It is a shame and disgrace in America for having such a lying president.
Comment Written 22-Nov-2020
reply by the author on 22-Nov-2020
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Thank you very much
Comment from Sandra du Plessis
A very well-written six-word poem. The first lie leads to another until the lies are found out then the trust is dead and the relationship will die shortly thereafter.
reply by the author on 22-Nov-2020
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A very well-written six-word poem. The first lie leads to another until the lies are found out then the trust is dead and the relationship will die shortly thereafter.
Comment Written 22-Nov-2020
reply by the author on 22-Nov-2020
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Thank you very much
Comment from Susan X Smith
This is actually a sad little piece, because trust, once broken, is very difficult to repair. The poem is a respectable contest entry. The picture is a nice touch.
reply by the author on 22-Nov-2020
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This is actually a sad little piece, because trust, once broken, is very difficult to repair. The poem is a respectable contest entry. The picture is a nice touch.
Comment Written 22-Nov-2020
reply by the author on 22-Nov-2020
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Thank you very much
