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Yes You Can!

Being a writer.

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Comment from Cynthia Adams1
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Wonderful poem. All of us who aspire to write and/or have had ittle kids, will love this post. The picture is precious and perfect. The expression on the little girl's face seems appropriate for someone beginning to write. She looks interested, a bit excited but very careful that she get it right :)
There are so very many entries in this contest that some really good ones may get overlooked. I hope this one does very well, as it should.

 Comment Written 22-Nov-2020


reply by the author on 22-Nov-2020
    Thank you so much! I hope that this poem does well in the contest too. I hope that I win. I'm crossing my fingers.
Comment from Pam (respa)
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-Very nice image
and presentation.
-You have used
your six words well.
-You have a good
message appropriate
for anyone, but
especially for children.
-They need to hear
"yes you can" more
than they often do.
-Good luck in the contest.

 Comment Written 22-Nov-2020


reply by the author on 22-Nov-2020
    Thank you! I hope that I win! I'm crossing my fingers! :)
reply by Pam (respa) on 22-Nov-2020
    You are welcome. Just repeat the title of your poem 10 times, and maybe you will!
Comment from Goodadvicechan
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Excellent choice of words. Nothing is impossible if one has confidence and persistence. As long as you don't give up, you will ultimately succeed. Well said.

 Comment Written 22-Nov-2020


reply by the author on 22-Nov-2020
    Thank you!
Comment from equestrik
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This is a great and encouraging write for encouraging one to write and to believe in ones self as a writer. It could apply to anything someone want to be! Well done.

 Comment Written 22-Nov-2020


reply by the author on 22-Nov-2020
    Thank you!
Comment from RodG
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I love the photo used to accompany this poem. Indeed, young writers need only be told "Yes, you can." We older writers need more motivation and direction . Rod

 Comment Written 21-Nov-2020


reply by the author on 21-Nov-2020
    Thank you!