The rule book
You live and learn9 total reviews
Comment from Paul Borders
After I read your submission, I said "what ?" Then I read it twice more. I like it because it's so relatable. It made me think back to my past and then I said "yep", this is quite a good entry in the contest.
reply by the author on 23-Nov-2020
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After I read your submission, I said "what ?" Then I read it twice more. I like it because it's so relatable. It made me think back to my past and then I said "yep", this is quite a good entry in the contest.
Comment Written 23-Nov-2020
reply by the author on 23-Nov-2020
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Thanks Paul.
Comment from Gypsy Blue Rose
Hello, anonymous,
Great entry for the Six Word Poetry Contest. Good word count. It flows well. Good connection between lines.
..good idea, the past is our rule book.
Good luck !
Gypsy
reply by the author on 23-Nov-2020
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Hello, anonymous,
Great entry for the Six Word Poetry Contest. Good word count. It flows well. Good connection between lines.
..good idea, the past is our rule book.
Good luck !
Gypsy
Comment Written 22-Nov-2020
reply by the author on 23-Nov-2020
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Thanks Gypsy
Comment from sammielwf
Dear Mystery Author,
Your six word poem, "The Rule Book" certainly was an interesting entry into the six word poetry contest.
You followed the contest rules to the letter and I can see why you selected the photograph that you did.
Good luck with the contest.
Sammielwf
reply by the author on 23-Nov-2020
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Dear Mystery Author,
Your six word poem, "The Rule Book" certainly was an interesting entry into the six word poetry contest.
You followed the contest rules to the letter and I can see why you selected the photograph that you did.
Good luck with the contest.
Sammielwf
Comment Written 22-Nov-2020
reply by the author on 23-Nov-2020
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Thanks
Comment from Rosemary Everson1
I think we each learn from our past. Sad to say, but we never want to live that kind of life again; but if the truth were to be told, we would end up marrying a fellow just like our own dad.
reply by the author on 22-Nov-2020
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I think we each learn from our past. Sad to say, but we never want to live that kind of life again; but if the truth were to be told, we would end up marrying a fellow just like our own dad.
Comment Written 22-Nov-2020
reply by the author on 22-Nov-2020
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Many thanks for the review. Much appreciated.
Comment from robyn corum
Dear Mystery Author,
It's hard to write a six-word poem worth ready, to be honest. (ssshhhh...) People keep trying but most fail miserably. haha I can say that because so far I have refused to even attempt one of these. *smile*
BUT yours is different. You have said a year's worth of posts in one a few tiny words. Exceptional effort and I wish you lots of good luck!
reply by the author on 22-Nov-2020
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Dear Mystery Author,
It's hard to write a six-word poem worth ready, to be honest. (ssshhhh...) People keep trying but most fail miserably. haha I can say that because so far I have refused to even attempt one of these. *smile*
BUT yours is different. You have said a year's worth of posts in one a few tiny words. Exceptional effort and I wish you lots of good luck!
Comment Written 22-Nov-2020
reply by the author on 22-Nov-2020
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Many thanks Robyn
Comment from Goodadvicechan
I like the six words. We all should learn from our past. Make sure don't commit the same mistakes twice , but keep track of all success whether they are big or small. Repeat these if possible. Good luck.
reply by the author on 22-Nov-2020
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I like the six words. We all should learn from our past. Make sure don't commit the same mistakes twice , but keep track of all success whether they are big or small. Repeat these if possible. Good luck.
Comment Written 22-Nov-2020
reply by the author on 22-Nov-2020
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Many thanks
Comment from equestrik
With this presentation of your well chosen words and your visual, you have conveyed your message in just these six words, best of luck to you in the contest.
reply by the author on 22-Nov-2020
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With this presentation of your well chosen words and your visual, you have conveyed your message in just these six words, best of luck to you in the contest.
Comment Written 22-Nov-2020
reply by the author on 22-Nov-2020
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many thanks
Comment from Pam (respa)
-Good artwork and
presentation.
-It reflects your topic well.
-I like your example of your
rule book; it is a good one
to use because, hopefully
we learn from our mistakes.
-Good luck in the contest.
reply by the author on 22-Nov-2020
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-Good artwork and
presentation.
-It reflects your topic well.
-I like your example of your
rule book; it is a good one
to use because, hopefully
we learn from our mistakes.
-Good luck in the contest.
Comment Written 21-Nov-2020
reply by the author on 22-Nov-2020
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Many thanks Pam
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You are welcome.
Comment from lancellot
Very interesting. We are mostly determined by our experiences and learned morals and behavior from out past. But, what happens when you encounter completely new and outside of your personal history? That is the question.
reply by the author on 22-Nov-2020
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Very interesting. We are mostly determined by our experiences and learned morals and behavior from out past. But, what happens when you encounter completely new and outside of your personal history? That is the question.
Comment Written 21-Nov-2020
reply by the author on 22-Nov-2020
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Many thanks for your views.
