Frenzied Wind
Cold, driving rain12 total reviews
Comment from Cynthia Adams1
Really nice congest entry.
Well said in so few words. I don't hear the word roiling nearly enough...a nice image, as is the sound image, Booms. Good artwork.
Good luck in the contest. Very good job.
reply by the author on 22-Nov-2020
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Really nice congest entry.
Well said in so few words. I don't hear the word roiling nearly enough...a nice image, as is the sound image, Booms. Good artwork.
Good luck in the contest. Very good job.
Comment Written 22-Nov-2020
reply by the author on 22-Nov-2020
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Thank you Cynthia.
Comment from Ann Market
I enjoyed reading this poem. Your imagery is very strong and you chose the perfect image for it! I liked the words you chose to describe the night-storm, too.
Good luck to you in the contest!
reply by the author on 22-Nov-2020
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I enjoyed reading this poem. Your imagery is very strong and you chose the perfect image for it! I liked the words you chose to describe the night-storm, too.
Good luck to you in the contest!
Comment Written 22-Nov-2020
reply by the author on 22-Nov-2020
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Thank you.
Comment from Rosemary Everson1
Your image is so gorgeous. When it is thundering, storming it's best to go for shelter. The lightning is powerful in this picture...ouch if it would hit an object within reach.
reply by the author on 22-Nov-2020
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Your image is so gorgeous. When it is thundering, storming it's best to go for shelter. The lightning is powerful in this picture...ouch if it would hit an object within reach.
Comment Written 22-Nov-2020
reply by the author on 22-Nov-2020
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Thank you Rosemary!
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Thank you Rosemary!
Comment from Gypsy Blue Rose
Hello, anonymous,
Great entry for the Six Word Poetry Contest. Good word count. It flows well. Good connection between lines.
I love thunder storms.
Good luck !
Gypsy
reply by the author on 22-Nov-2020
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Hello, anonymous,
Great entry for the Six Word Poetry Contest. Good word count. It flows well. Good connection between lines.
I love thunder storms.
Good luck !
Gypsy
Comment Written 22-Nov-2020
reply by the author on 22-Nov-2020
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Thank you Gypsy!
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Thank you Gypsy!
Comment from Sandra du Plessis
A very well-written six-word poem. Thunderstorms usually are coming quickly with frightening lightning and loud booms of thunder that last a few minutes before it is over and gone somewhere else.
reply by the author on 22-Nov-2020
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A very well-written six-word poem. Thunderstorms usually are coming quickly with frightening lightning and loud booms of thunder that last a few minutes before it is over and gone somewhere else.
Comment Written 22-Nov-2020
reply by the author on 22-Nov-2020
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Thank you Sandra.
Melissa
Comment from Dawn Munro
I can't imagine a more descriptive use of six words -- the mental images they paint need no picture to accompany them, although I love the one you chose! Best of luck in the contest.
reply by the author on 22-Nov-2020
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I can't imagine a more descriptive use of six words -- the mental images they paint need no picture to accompany them, although I love the one you chose! Best of luck in the contest.
Comment Written 22-Nov-2020
reply by the author on 22-Nov-2020
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Thank you Dawn!!
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My pleasure.
Comment from Dolly'sPoems
That is a vivid picture and your words bring it to life and I have seen some terrible storms in my lifetime but nothing like that one, the flat terrain helps these storms to travel at speed, much enjoyed, love Dolly x
reply by the author on 22-Nov-2020
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That is a vivid picture and your words bring it to life and I have seen some terrible storms in my lifetime but nothing like that one, the flat terrain helps these storms to travel at speed, much enjoyed, love Dolly x
Comment Written 22-Nov-2020
reply by the author on 22-Nov-2020
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Thank you Dolly!
Comment from Cybertron1986
I love how this piece encapsulates the essence of imagery associated with one of the natural occurrences of nature. Great presentation and word selection. As the reader, I could already sense the storm coming. Beautiful.
reply by the author on 22-Nov-2020
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I love how this piece encapsulates the essence of imagery associated with one of the natural occurrences of nature. Great presentation and word selection. As the reader, I could already sense the storm coming. Beautiful.
Comment Written 21-Nov-2020
reply by the author on 22-Nov-2020
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Thank you!
Comment from lancellot
Yeah, that sounds like some good sleeping weather. Well, it is if you aren't afraid of thunder or have fear of being swept away. You know, I guess night storms can be bad for some.
Good entry.
reply by the author on 22-Nov-2020
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Yeah, that sounds like some good sleeping weather. Well, it is if you aren't afraid of thunder or have fear of being swept away. You know, I guess night storms can be bad for some.
Good entry.
Comment Written 21-Nov-2020
reply by the author on 22-Nov-2020
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Thank you!
Comment from Susan X Smith
This little post is an excellent contest entry, keeping as it does, to the limited format. The picture is a great, and I would say, necessary, addition, since the statement is so brief.
reply by the author on 21-Nov-2020
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This little post is an excellent contest entry, keeping as it does, to the limited format. The picture is a great, and I would say, necessary, addition, since the statement is so brief.
Comment Written 21-Nov-2020
reply by the author on 21-Nov-2020
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Thanks so much Susan :)
