Comment from Ann Market

Excellent

I really enjoyed the strong imagery, here! The picture is also perfect for this poem.

Good luck to you in the contest!

 Comment Written 22-Nov-2020

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reply by the author on 23-Nov-2020

Thank you for the read, review and comment.

Comment from Goodadvicechan

Excellent

Like the selection of the picture. Life have ups and downs. Enjoy life when it is up. Don't despair when it is down. The good day will come back like four seasons of the year.

 Comment Written 22-Nov-2020

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reply by the author on 23-Nov-2020

Thank you for the read, review and comment. Guess we are like leaves.

Comment from RodG

Excellent

This very short poem accurately describes the transition of the leaves and the seasons themselves--autumn into fall..
excellent word choices to describe the leaves. "Crackle" is effective use of onomatopoeia. Rod

 Comment Written 21-Nov-2020

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reply by the author on 21-Nov-2020

Thanks much for the read and encouraging review.

Comment from zanya

Excellent

A poem that is so appropriate and captures Nature's seasonal shifts so effectively - not always easy to achieve this is such a short format -thanks for sharing

 Comment Written 21-Nov-2020

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reply by the author on 21-Nov-2020

Thanks much for the read and encouraging review.