Reviews from
The dead are hunting - you!
3 total reviews
Comment from
Liz O'Neill
I like your use of alliteration. The hard c's become onomatopoetic. The reader needs little imagination to hear the crunching of bones. This has a strong animated imagery. Well done.
Comment Written 21-Nov-2020
reply by the author on 22-Nov-2020
Thank you so much. I'm glad you liked it.
Comment from
Mia Twysted
I love the picture that you have picked to go with this piece. This piece tells me to look out as I go out into the world. You never know where danger is going to come from.
Comment Written 21-Nov-2020
reply by the author on 21-Nov-2020
Thank you. I am glad it resonated with a message.
Comment from
Elizabeth Emerald
Spot-on depiction of zombie--you wisely made use of title/desc to "flesh" out the theme and give a sly hint to your clever punchline. Nightmares tonight--your fault!
Comment Written 21-Nov-2020
reply by the author on 21-Nov-2020
Glad you enjoyed the zombies. LOL
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