Comment from damommy

Excellent

I felt calm just reading your words and seeing the picture. Lovely poem. Nothing's so soothing as hearing birds sign, I think. A book of these is such a good idea.

 Comment Written 21-Nov-2020

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reply by the author on 21-Nov-2020

Thanks for the review. I am glad you felt calm reading my poem and seeing the picture. Birds are so enjoyable and bring a lot of pleasure. Gypsy has come up with a great idea.

Comment from barbara.wilkey

Excellent

I enjoyed reading your poetic version of your walk. I completely understand because I love listening to the birds wake up in the morning. It sets the tune for the entire day. Thank you for sharing.

 Comment Written 21-Nov-2020

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reply by the author on 21-Nov-2020

Thanks for the review, Barbara. I appreciate your comments about my poem and the joy of listening to the birds. They do set the tune for the day!

Comment from Sandra du Plessis

Excellent

A very well-written 5-7-5 poem in addition to the multi-author Renga book. The first things we notice in nature are the tuneful songs the birds perform in a warm sunny morning.

 Comment Written 21-Nov-2020

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reply by the author on 21-Nov-2020

Thank you for the review, Sandra. I appreciate your comments about the Renga book and the songs of the birds.

Comment from Dolly'sPoems

Excellent

Birds delight us with their song, we enjoy their presence and we envy their freedom to take to the skies. I enjoyed your uplifting words here Pam, love Dolly x

 Comment Written 21-Nov-2020

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reply by the author on 21-Nov-2020

Thanks for the review, Dolly. I appreciate your comments about the birds and their songs, and the poem being uplifting, too.

Comment from ESOSTINE

Excellent

Loves the site of beautiful nature, the singing colourful birds and the clapping jams of the sea waves. Thanks for sharing your story. The associated picture brightens the heart.

 Comment Written 21-Nov-2020

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reply by the author on 21-Nov-2020

Thanks for the review, Esostine. I appreciate your comments about nature, the birds singing, and the picture and lake, too.

Comment from Raffaelina Lowcock

Excellent

This is a lovely presentation. It brings to mind the mornings that we awaken and hear the tuneful refrain of a bird or birds in our backyard and how pleasant it feels to hear their song.

Ralf

 Comment Written 21-Nov-2020

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reply by the author on 21-Nov-2020

Thanks for the review, Ralf. I appreciate your comments about this presentation, and waking up to birds singing. It is very pleasant.

Comment from Katherine M. (k-11)

Excellent

I find this very cheering, being cut-off from the countryside, locked down in a cold, foggy, deserted city. We are waiting for the birds to take over as they did in the sping lockdown, but it looks as though they have all left for warmer climes.

 Comment Written 21-Nov-2020

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reply by the author on 21-Nov-2020

Thanks for the review, Katherine. I am glad this brought you a bit of cheer. I didn't know you were in lock down; I had heard about Australia. Maybe the birds will get there, yet!

reply by Katherine M. (k-11) on 21-Nov-2020

Yes. Lock down leading up to Christmas is not really fun, especially as we are working from home.

reply by the author on 21-Nov-2020

It doesn't sound like fun. But over here, we just keep getting news of cases spiking. There was no reason for it, either!

Comment from Joanne Gill-Maddick

Excellent

This is a very beautiful 5-7-5 poem. Birds sing tuneful songs. As sun glistens on calm lake. Peaceful existence. Very nicely done. Such a beautiful photo the birds are so beautiful and colourful . So nicely done.

 Comment Written 21-Nov-2020

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reply by the author on 21-Nov-2020

Thanks for the review, Joanne. I appreciate your comments about the poem, birds singing, and photo. I'm glad you enjoyed it.

Comment from Mary Vigasin

Excellent

As I have mostly loud blue Jays your words and the image you give in your words and the "sound " you give your reader is both calming and delightful.
Well written and I enjoyed.
Mary

 Comment Written 21-Nov-2020

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reply by the author on 21-Nov-2020

Thanks for the review, Mary. We have all kinds of songbirds, including blue jays. They are a noisy bird. I am glad you liked the poem, images, and the calm nature of it. I am glad you enjoyed it. Have a good weekend.

Comment from Pantygynt

Excellent

The birds round here are somewhat quiet and the main sound is the little stream at the side of my garden that is very full of water with all the rain we've been having. But it is always peaceful here. I am very lucky.

 Comment Written 21-Nov-2020

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reply by the author on 21-Nov-2020

Thanks for the review. I appreciate your comments about the birds and your stream. We live in a peaceful area, too.