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Mom's Story

How Mother Found Jesus

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Comment from Elizabeth Emerald
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Powerful tribute--wry humor--I DROVE her/she led me. In this short piece you skillfully convey her conversion experience and how she brought the family to Jesus. (hyphenate life-giving)



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 Comment Written 20-Nov-2020


reply by the author on 20-Nov-2020
    Thanks! I just wrote a review on your clever piece where you talk to yourself. Reminds me of a friend who had that habit and when I called him on it, he said, "I have to talk to someone intelligent once in a while!" I'm off to hyphenate-now!
Comment from Cynthia Adams1
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You have surely written a loving and moving poem about your mother.
It is wonderful that you can credit her for so much of your success. I hope she lived to see it.
Nice job.
Your story is well-written and flows well.
Happy Thanksgiving to you and yours.

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 Comment Written 20-Nov-2020


reply by the author on 20-Nov-2020
    Thank you, and a happy Thanksgiving to you amd your family as well.