Comment from sammielwf

Excellent

Oh yes, Raul....
One should never ever cross a zombie.
Zombies are always looking for fresh humans to add to their walking dead army. Once they have a piece of you- it's all over.
Good job Raul.
Sammielwf

 Comment Written 22-Nov-2020

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reply by the author on 22-Nov-2020

Thank you!

Comment from Liz O'Neill

Excellent

This is not only a cautionary tale, but a strong metaphor. It invites the reader to examine if they have fallen prey to emotional zombies. When we get involved with certain people who are emotionally sniping and we react in kind, we are reaching their level of disgust. We become one of them. Well thought out. I am voting for this one.

 Comment Written 21-Nov-2020

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reply by the author on 21-Nov-2020

Thank you!

Comment from Monica Chaddick

Good

This was a good poem. I love the artwork that you selected to accompany your piece. I wish you the best of luck in the contest and in all future writing endeavors.

 Comment Written 21-Nov-2020

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reply by the author on 21-Nov-2020

Thank you! I hope that I win.

Comment from Michael Ludwinder

Excellent

I thought this was very creative. I love how you share so much with three lines. For some reason the third line "felt" out of place to me. I think, perhaps, because it is so direct. Hard to explain. But overall I thought this was an excellent poem. Kinda funny. But does a great job of meeting the contest guidelines.

 Comment Written 20-Nov-2020

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reply by the author on 20-Nov-2020

Thank you!

Comment from Bill Schott

Excellent

This 5-7-5, Zombies, has the right set up and renders some pretty good advice if you find yourself battling wits with zombies.

 Comment Written 20-Nov-2020

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reply by the author on 20-Nov-2020

Thank you!