Comment from ESOSTINE

Excellent

I went into deep er reflection as I read the poem over and over. All the verses stood out in their unique messages. "It seems some men aspire to thrones, where they will rule like powerful drones.", since "Man's hearts will never be contrite, (when)... souls build a haughty site." I did identify more with those lines. Lol!

 Comment Written 26-Nov-2020

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reply by the author on 26-Nov-2020

Thanks so much for these Marvellous comments and an excellent review, well done, blessings Roy

Comment from Ann Market

Exceptional

The final four stanzas resonated with me so deeply. This poem is stunning! As always, the rhyming is very nice and the rhythm is wonderful. Lovely poem; thanks for sharing it!

 Comment Written 22-Nov-2020

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reply by the author on 22-Nov-2020

Thanks so much Ann, for these wonderful comments and a great review, blessings Roy

Comment from Ben Colder

Exceptional

Dear Bro, America is in trouble. We have lost our Republic to a socialist move then communist as you know. Many have no clue how we have lost it all within. Please pray for our country. Theses young people have no clue.

 Comment Written 22-Nov-2020

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reply by the author on 22-Nov-2020

Thanks so much Ben, for these wonderful comments and a great review, blessings Roy

Comment from Colin John

Excellent

Hi Roy, good to know I can come and read your words to find real poetry on this site, another 'tongue twister in symmetry' if that makes sense, great to read. Cheers Colin

 Comment Written 22-Nov-2020

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reply by the author on 22-Nov-2020

Thanks so much Colin, for these wonderful comments and a great review, blessings Roy

Comment from Ulla

Excellent

Yes, Roy without having the faith as you do, I totally agree with you. We live during some very disturbing times and the most important is to hold on to our beliefs whether they may be spiritual or moral beliefs. The main thing is to fight for our democracy and freedom of speech. You have stirred up some very profound thoughts tonight. Ulla:)))

 Comment Written 21-Nov-2020

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reply by the author on 21-Nov-2020

Thanks so much Ulla, for these excellent comments and a great review, blessings Roy

Comment from barbara.wilkey

Excellent

I do believe that both sides have an element of truth, but only God know what's the actual truth. We may never know and now there's so rewriting of history that I actually saw and know is true. Only God can solve this.

 Comment Written 21-Nov-2020

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reply by the author on 21-Nov-2020

Thanks Barbara, for these terrific comments and review, blessings Roy

Comment from damommy

Excellent

Amen to that. Keep these poems coming, boy. We all need to keep our minds and hearts turned to God. He's the only way we'll get through these trying times.

 Comment Written 21-Nov-2020

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reply by the author on 21-Nov-2020

Thanks so much Yvonne, for these excellent comments and a great review, blessings Roy

Comment from Gert sherwood

Excellent

Hello Roy,
My how well you describe there are so many voices out there, some contradicting others, accusing, slandering, misleading. Indeed what is truth.
I like how you say you have faith when you said----
I'm full of faith, yet fringed by doubt.I'm full of faith, yet fringed by doubt.

 Comment Written 20-Nov-2020

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reply by the author on 21-Nov-2020

Thanks so much Gert, for these wonderful comments and a great review, blessings Roy

Comment from Taurus the Elder

Excellent

Very good. Strong image of mans plight. Technically sound, good rhyme scheme, strong ending. The art work is exceptional, that's what drew me in to read your work. Great job. Wishing you continued success.

 Comment Written 20-Nov-2020

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reply by the author on 21-Nov-2020

Thanks so much for these wonderful comments and a great review, blessings Roy

Comment from Rx kingpen

Excellent

A good metaphor for that old saying, a war of words. I like it. Maybe a Verbal Assault?
Cap. Bible.
Good flow, great word selection to fit the scheme.
And of course the positive outlook of attaini g life through His Atonement.

 Comment Written 20-Nov-2020

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reply by the author on 21-Nov-2020

Thanks so much for these wonderful comments and a great review, blessings Roy