Dusk
An eerie atmosphere3 total reviews
Comment from sammielwf
Mystery Poet,
Dusk is one of my favorite times of the day.....and your a little bit sleepy but not quite yet 5-7-5 made me want to sit on the steps of one of the houses in the photo....watch the little town drift into quietness.
Well done.
Sammielwf
reply by the author on 21-Nov-2020
Mystery Poet,
Dusk is one of my favorite times of the day.....and your a little bit sleepy but not quite yet 5-7-5 made me want to sit on the steps of one of the houses in the photo....watch the little town drift into quietness.
Well done.
Sammielwf
Comment Written 20-Nov-2020
reply by the author on 21-Nov-2020
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Thank you so much for your wonderful review and super6 stars. Much appreciated.
Comment from Mark D. R.
I like the overall presentation for your contest entry - good choice of colors, illustration, and words - to give us the feeling of that sleepy little town wrapped in swirls of dust at nighttime.
reply by the author on 20-Nov-2020
I like the overall presentation for your contest entry - good choice of colors, illustration, and words - to give us the feeling of that sleepy little town wrapped in swirls of dust at nighttime.
Comment Written 19-Nov-2020
reply by the author on 20-Nov-2020
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Many thanks.
Comment from R56Ma3
I enjoyed reading your poem about nightfall in a small city. Everyone indoors, children are in bed. This is quite relaxing. Thank you for sharing! R56ma3
reply by the author on 20-Nov-2020
I enjoyed reading your poem about nightfall in a small city. Everyone indoors, children are in bed. This is quite relaxing. Thank you for sharing! R56ma3
Comment Written 19-Nov-2020
reply by the author on 20-Nov-2020
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Many thanks.