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Grudges

Short poem

33 total reviews 
Comment from judiverse
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Great artwork for this. Harboring grudges isn't a good thing. Lovely alliteration with your "T" words. Well placed rhyme with through, true, and you (yourself). Sorry to be late with this, but I've fallen behind in reviewing. judi

 Comment Written 25-Nov-2020


reply by the author on 26-Nov-2020
    Hi Judi. Thanks for the great review and comments!!

    Melissa
reply by judiverse on 26-Nov-2020
    You're very welcome. Happy Thanksgiving. judi
Comment from Colin John
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Hi Melissa, oh how I wish this was true, but so many people are gullible and accept what they hear then judge without bothering to find out themselves, hate it. Cheers Colin xx

 Comment Written 22-Nov-2020


reply by the author on 22-Nov-2020
    Hi Colin... I am delighted you felt the message of this verse. I strongly feel we should not borrow grudges and examine things for ourselves. :) Thank you very much!

    Melissa
Comment from juliaSjames
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Interesting message in this short write. During this time of news and fake news as well as the onslaught of social media, it's not easy to determine truth. Sometimes we absorb viewpoints unconsciously.

Your words cause me to pause and ponder. Is this what I believe? Or is someone else yanking my chain?

Thanks for sharing your wisdom.

Stay safe

Blessings Julia

 Comment Written 19-Nov-2020


reply by the author on 20-Nov-2020
    Hello sweet Julia. I thank you for your introspective review. Hugs!

    Melissa
Comment from Sandra du Plessis
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A very well-written poem about holding grudges against someone is never useful to anyone. Rather talk about what ever may be wrong and get along with others, despite the differences.

 Comment Written 19-Nov-2020


reply by the author on 19-Nov-2020
    Thank you Sandra! I just thought it was something important to say during these stressful times. :)

    Melissa
Comment from Aussie
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You are so right. If they have a grudge and grind their teeth, smile and wish them well (straight out the door.) We are told to forgive because we can't be forgiven unless we do forgive.

 Comment Written 19-Nov-2020


reply by the author on 19-Nov-2020
    Thank you Kace! I just thought it was something important to say during these stressful times. :). I appreciate the stars!

    Melissa
Comment from duchessofdrumborg
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"Grudges", is an extremely well-written and thought-provoking piece. Woven through each line of this talented poet's work, are the golden threads of truth. I look forward to seeing your next post.

 Comment Written 19-Nov-2020


reply by the author on 19-Nov-2020
    Thank you Duchess! I just thought it was something important to say during these stressful times. :)

    Melissa
reply by duchessofdrumborg on 19-Nov-2020
    Mellisa,
    you're very welcome. What you said was important, and these are certainly stressful times :)
    God bless you take care, and stay safe!
    the Duchess
Comment from tfawcus
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There is a powerful aphorism expressed in your short poem. Shades of Hamlet here - to one's own self be true. It is better to make up one's own mind than to join the bandwagon of dissent. Perhaps a message for our times...

 Comment Written 19-Nov-2020


reply by the author on 19-Nov-2020
    Thank you Tony! I just thought it was something important to say during these stressful times. :)

    Melissa
Comment from Ann Market
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This is very true-quite profound, actually-of so many situations. It is paramount to stay true to yourself without carrying around someone else's opinions or issues and betraying yourself in the process. Very well written!

 Comment Written 19-Nov-2020


reply by the author on 19-Nov-2020
    Thank you Ann! I just thought it was something important to say during these stressful times. :)

    Melissa
Comment from lyenochka
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So true! And I love your illustration of the crows going after a falcon / hawk that may not have even attacked their nests personally. We tend to be defensive for our loved ones. But we should be objective as possible as God loves all.

 Comment Written 18-Nov-2020


reply by the author on 19-Nov-2020
    Thank you Helen! I just thought it was something important to say during these stressful times. :)

    Melissa
Comment from June Sargent
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That's a good point. Why should we carry someone else's baggage? We have enough of our own to deal with. To thine own self be true. My high school motto...

 Comment Written 18-Nov-2020


reply by the author on 19-Nov-2020
    Thank you June! I just thought it was something important to say during these stressful times. :)

    Melissa