THE CURSE
Viewing comments for Chapter 39 "The Voices in the Night"The six book of the Novels of the Breedline
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Comment from Justin Chopin
This was, a very creative story Scongrove. I was very impressed at how the senses of justice and compassion that you were able to articulate through your werewolf Jenna , especially with the last lines of your tale when she realizes that even though she may be cursed to be a monster, she can still has the choice to do good with the new abilities she has been bestowed. A very compelling story.
reply by the author on 23-Nov-2020
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This was, a very creative story Scongrove. I was very impressed at how the senses of justice and compassion that you were able to articulate through your werewolf Jenna , especially with the last lines of your tale when she realizes that even though she may be cursed to be a monster, she can still has the choice to do good with the new abilities she has been bestowed. A very compelling story.
Comment Written 20-Nov-2020
reply by the author on 23-Nov-2020
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Thanks so much, Justin :)
So thrilled you enjoyed the chapter. I was hoping the reader would see at the end, although Jena is cursed, it is also a gift. Your feedback and kind review is greatly appreciated.
Sincerely,
Shana :)
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You're welcome.
Comment from Mistydawn
What an intense chapter and so heartwarming at the end. I'm so glad Jena was able to save them and that she was able to get a sense of peace over the whole ordeal. Your chapter is very well-written, suspenseful start to finish of course. I look forward to reading more.
reply by the author on 18-Nov-2020
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What an intense chapter and so heartwarming at the end. I'm so glad Jena was able to save them and that she was able to get a sense of peace over the whole ordeal. Your chapter is very well-written, suspenseful start to finish of course. I look forward to reading more.
Comment Written 17-Nov-2020
reply by the author on 18-Nov-2020
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Thanks so much, Mistydawn :)
I am so happy you didn't find the chapter offensive. I get worried about some of my chapters being too detailed for FanStory readers. I want to share my stories and get excited, but also worried. You made my day!
Hugs,
Shana :)
Comment from royowen
Wouldn't it be great to help those that couldn't help themselves, as a boy I longed to be a super hero, someone like superman or Captain America, my two youngest grandsons are great fans of the superhero series, with the appropriate dolls, knocking of the "bad guys" just like Jena is. This is a great product of your considerable imagination and talent dear girl. Well done, excellent tale. Are you OK? Blessings Roy
reply by the author on 18-Nov-2020
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Wouldn't it be great to help those that couldn't help themselves, as a boy I longed to be a super hero, someone like superman or Captain America, my two youngest grandsons are great fans of the superhero series, with the appropriate dolls, knocking of the "bad guys" just like Jena is. This is a great product of your considerable imagination and talent dear girl. Well done, excellent tale. Are you OK? Blessings Roy
Comment Written 17-Nov-2020
reply by the author on 18-Nov-2020
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Thanks so much my dear friend :)
I am like you. I love a hero. I know Jena's curse is quite gruesome, but at least she is the good guy. I wanted to add the little girl to show the reader how gently and caring Jena's creature can be.
And thanks for asking. I'm okay. Life is hard but I am strong. Plus I have caring people in my life and a big faith in a loving God.
Always your fan,
Shana :)
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Good girl, my prayers are with you
Comment from AJ McCall
What a way to encourage one's self when they seemed doomed with a curse. I could imagine the scene like in a movie! I'm sure we'll see Amy and her mother very soon later on. But what about Nicolas? What will he think about it? Can't wait to read the next chapter!
reply by the author on 18-Nov-2020
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What a way to encourage one's self when they seemed doomed with a curse. I could imagine the scene like in a movie! I'm sure we'll see Amy and her mother very soon later on. But what about Nicolas? What will he think about it? Can't wait to read the next chapter!
Comment Written 17-Nov-2020
reply by the author on 18-Nov-2020
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Thanks so much, AJ :)
Although Jena is cursed with a terrifying creature, her humanity is still intact. She has a loving and kind heart.
Nicolas already knows about her curse. His brother cursed her. He loves her all the same and realizes what she has to do.
I appreciate your support!
Have a great week,
Shana :)
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You're welcome! You too!
Comment from fm wright
Really love the ending to this chapter. I like it that Jena can communicate verbally even in her creature form. Though of course violence was needed, you did it with minimal use while still getting the scene across. Also think the pictures are great. Good job.
reply by the author on 18-Nov-2020
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Really love the ending to this chapter. I like it that Jena can communicate verbally even in her creature form. Though of course violence was needed, you did it with minimal use while still getting the scene across. Also think the pictures are great. Good job.
Comment Written 17-Nov-2020
reply by the author on 18-Nov-2020
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Thanks so much, Faye :)
You are so kind to me. I was hoping this chapter wouldn't offend anyone here. I know it's a bit gruesome. But that is Jena's curse, although she still has her humanity intact. This is her purpose now. She is to destroy evil and save the innocent.
Glad you enjoyed the photos. I love the wolf! Thanks for your kind words of encouragement.
Have a great week my friend!
Hugs,
Shana :)
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As a former hybrid wolf breeder I love the wolf myself.
Hiugs,
Faye
