Comment from nancy_e_davis

Excellent

Smyth should know it was his stinking personality that made Roseanna pick the other guy. What a cad! She should have told him it was because he was a jerk. LOL If course she couldn't because she is a lady. I hope Smyth doesn't take revenge on her brother. Good job, Earl. Nancy:)

 Comment Written 17-Nov-2020

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reply by the author on 18-Nov-2020

I Appreciate you taking the time to read and review my work Nancy. Thanks for sticking with the story.

Comment from poetwatch

Excellent

Earl, I don't like that last remark, "There is more than one way to get Shawnee justice, my son." You got something cooking that I have to figure out, but know that I wouldn't find out until... next chapter. :) I glad Richard grew a pair. Thank you for sharing.

 Comment Written 17-Nov-2020

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reply by the author on 18-Nov-2020

I toyed with Richard staying a milk sop but it opened up a whole other storyline for me. I Appreciate you taking the time to read and review my work. Thanks for sticking with the story.

Comment from Ben Colder

Excellent

Out of six. Enjoyed this. You did much research and I like the way you have used your talent. I can see this unfolding and it could easily interrupted as something the Bents would have been guilty of when building their trading post.
Thanks for sharing

 Comment Written 17-Nov-2020

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reply by the author on 18-Nov-2020

Thanks Ben, I Appreciate your insight and I respect your opinion above all regarding this genre. I'm glad you're taking the time to read and review my work. Thanks for sticking with the story.

Comment from BethShelby

Excellent

I'm enjoying this story although I didn't get in on the beginning and I've not had time to read the background. I like the dialogue and the action. You are an excellent writer.

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 Comment Written 17-Nov-2020

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reply by the author on 17-Nov-2020

Thank you very much. I appreciate you taking the time to read and review my work.

Comment from robyn corum

Excellent

Earl,

Good chapter - looks like things are about to get a little tricky - and dangerous. *smile* This was good stuff!

Notes:
1.) While he hadn't made it a priority to hire seasoned woodsm(e)n

2.) Smythe scrunched up his face, 'Oh God, what now?' (h)e thought.

3.) "How much f(a)rther to the ferry?"
--> 'farther' for distances

4.) Swooping Eagle sat down cross-(l)egged across from his father.

5.) "Swooping Eagle scowled.
--> no quote mark

Thanks!





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 Comment Written 17-Nov-2020

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reply by the author on 17-Nov-2020

Thanks for your editing Robyn. You keep me honest.