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Anger

pausing before reacting can change a situation

3 total reviews 
Comment from Jessica M Lee
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It is better for us to think before we act. If we let our emotions run our lives, our character runs out of control. But if we step back, take a breath and think before we act or speak, so much more can come of it. When said in anger to a loved one or not, it effects the relationship that was so tenderly built. Great job portraying a much needed word in such a simple way. Best of luck:)

 Comment Written 18-Nov-2020

reply by the author on 18-Nov-2020
    Thank you for your time and your review:) I appreciate both.
reply by Jessica M Lee on 18-Nov-2020
    ;)
Comment from Rx kingpen
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Very intriguing.im sort of new to this site and this form is also new to me.
I really liked it. How a few words opened up a whole landscape of wisdom.
Very effective. I'll have to investigate this style more. The overall effect? Profound.

 Comment Written 16-Nov-2020

reply by the author on 17-Nov-2020
    Welcome:) Thank you for reading and reviewing with your kind words.
    I like the challenge of condensing thoughts , although I can ramble easily, also:)
Comment from Wendy G
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Excellent Senryu. Thought-provoking, especially because short and to the point. The artwork is a perfect accompaniment. Best wishes for the writing contest.

 Comment Written 16-Nov-2020

reply by the author on 17-Nov-2020
    Thank you for your time, review and good wishes. I appreciate all :)