Alicia's Ode to Me
Ode to You (yes, You!)6 total reviews
Comment from LeftHandedScribe
This is such a loving tribute to your friend. If we have one person who sees through to our soul and accepts our truth, both the good and the bad, then gold has been found.
reply by the author on 05-Dec-2020
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This is such a loving tribute to your friend. If we have one person who sees through to our soul and accepts our truth, both the good and the bad, then gold has been found.
Comment Written 04-Dec-2020
reply by the author on 05-Dec-2020
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Dear LHS, thank you for your comments and review. Dove
Comment from Iza Deleanu
A cute little ode to you... To both of you. It's so nice to have a friend that can appreciate you for what you are and how you feel. Thank you for sharing and good luck with the contest.
reply by the author on 05-Dec-2020
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A cute little ode to you... To both of you. It's so nice to have a friend that can appreciate you for what you are and how you feel. Thank you for sharing and good luck with the contest.
Comment Written 04-Dec-2020
reply by the author on 05-Dec-2020
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Dear Iza, thank you for your comments and review. Dove
Comment from Carol Hillebrenner
I'm no poet but was attracted to your title. Unfortunately I could not understand the first line or your rhyming pattern. Which I suppose proves I'm no poet. Good luck with this.
reply by the author on 05-Dec-2020
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I'm no poet but was attracted to your title. Unfortunately I could not understand the first line or your rhyming pattern. Which I suppose proves I'm no poet. Good luck with this.
Comment Written 04-Dec-2020
reply by the author on 05-Dec-2020
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Dear Carol, thank you for your comments and review. I will go in to the poem and try to send you an explanation. Dove
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Dear Carol, I said in my poem that my friend Alicia sat down with me, the next line ended with "coffee", that rhymes with "me,' at the end of the first line. Thank you for your good luck wishes. Dove
Comment from Liz O'Neill
This is a lovely tribute to you by your friend. You were able to rhyme without it becoming or sounding awkward. You have created good imagery for the reader to understand what kind of person you are.
reply by the author on 29-Nov-2020
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This is a lovely tribute to you by your friend. You were able to rhyme without it becoming or sounding awkward. You have created good imagery for the reader to understand what kind of person you are.
Comment Written 29-Nov-2020
reply by the author on 29-Nov-2020
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Dear Liz, thank you for your comments and review.
Comment from Teri7
This is a very well written poem you have penned for the Ode to You (yes, you) contest. You used very nice descriptive words and very nice imagery from the picture you used. Best wishes in the contest. Teri
reply by the author on 15-Nov-2020
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This is a very well written poem you have penned for the Ode to You (yes, you) contest. You used very nice descriptive words and very nice imagery from the picture you used. Best wishes in the contest. Teri
Comment Written 14-Nov-2020
reply by the author on 15-Nov-2020
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Dear Teri, thank you for your comments and review.
Comment from palmart
Great strategy in your writing to include a character that speaks in your behalf. That brings some magic to your ode and describes it "like from outside you". Great picture! And rhyming is well polished.
reply by the author on 15-Nov-2020
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Great strategy in your writing to include a character that speaks in your behalf. That brings some magic to your ode and describes it "like from outside you". Great picture! And rhyming is well polished.
Comment Written 14-Nov-2020
reply by the author on 15-Nov-2020
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Dear palmart, thank you for your comments and review.
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You´re very welcome, Writer!
Blessings!
