Winter Feast
The Owl18 total reviews
Comment from tfawcus
What a splendid picture that is! Your poem does it justice, too. I can just imagine the rumblings in the owl's stomach. Rodents, beware!
I enjoyed your video clips as well.
reply by the author on 16-Nov-2020
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What a splendid picture that is! Your poem does it justice, too. I can just imagine the rumblings in the owl's stomach. Rodents, beware!
I enjoyed your video clips as well.
Comment Written 15-Nov-2020
reply by the author on 16-Nov-2020
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Thank you for the lovely review and kind compliments, dear Tony. Both mean so much to me.
Sending you my best today as always,
Sal XOs.....
Comment from Carmen Ducharme
Great job on a well written 5/7/5 poem ! Congratulations in your win .I agree on the vote .Your poem even though short smoke in such depth ! And to add the video's makes it even more amazing !
reply by the author on 17-Nov-2020
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Great job on a well written 5/7/5 poem ! Congratulations in your win .I agree on the vote .Your poem even though short smoke in such depth ! And to add the video's makes it even more amazing !
Comment Written 15-Nov-2020
reply by the author on 17-Nov-2020
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Thank you for the lovely review and kind compliments, dear Carnen. It is so appreciated. Sending you my best today as always,
Sally XOs....
Comment from Father Flaps
Hi Sally,
Congratulations on winning the 5-7-5 contest!
I love the picture you chose to accompany your poem. Look at those big eyes!
An owl is a patient hunter with very keen eyesight. And some of these night birds are huge with monster wings.
It's surprising how many mice are in the woods. They are a great food source for foxes and owls.
Nicely penned! No wonder you won.
Hugs,
Kimbob
reply by the author on 17-Nov-2020
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Hi Sally,
Congratulations on winning the 5-7-5 contest!
I love the picture you chose to accompany your poem. Look at those big eyes!
An owl is a patient hunter with very keen eyesight. And some of these night birds are huge with monster wings.
It's surprising how many mice are in the woods. They are a great food source for foxes and owls.
Nicely penned! No wonder you won.
Hugs,
Kimbob
Comment Written 15-Nov-2020
reply by the author on 17-Nov-2020
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Aw, thank you, dear Kimbob. It's was fun and I enjoyed doing it. I love owls and enjoyed showcasing them in my recent haikus. Sending you my best today as always,
Sal XOs....
Comment from equestrik
What a lovely presentation for the 5-7-5 poetry contest. The poem emphasises the picture and both together are lovely. I love the extra owl videos! I wish you the best of luck in the contest.
reply by the author on 15-Nov-2020
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What a lovely presentation for the 5-7-5 poetry contest. The poem emphasises the picture and both together are lovely. I love the extra owl videos! I wish you the best of luck in the contest.
Comment Written 14-Nov-2020
reply by the author on 15-Nov-2020
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Thank you so much!
Comment from Bill Schott
This 5-7-5, Winter Feast, has the proper formatting and finds the waking owl in time to snag a couple of breakfast mouse-nuggets on their way to nowhere.
reply by the author on 15-Nov-2020
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This 5-7-5, Winter Feast, has the proper formatting and finds the waking owl in time to snag a couple of breakfast mouse-nuggets on their way to nowhere.
Comment Written 14-Nov-2020
reply by the author on 15-Nov-2020
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Than you, Bill!
Comment from Wendy G
Lovely photo and poem about the cycle of nature. Well written. You have maintained the required syllable structure without forcing it. Well done. Best wishes for the contest.
reply by the author on 14-Nov-2020
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Lovely photo and poem about the cycle of nature. Well written. You have maintained the required syllable structure without forcing it. Well done. Best wishes for the contest.
Comment Written 14-Nov-2020
reply by the author on 14-Nov-2020
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Thank you so much!
Comment from palmart
Nice poem! Despite of the natural scene that involves food and its rawness, picture brings some funny situation of having an owl "dressed" in snow. The additional videos brings more light to the situation described in your poem.
reply by the author on 14-Nov-2020
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Nice poem! Despite of the natural scene that involves food and its rawness, picture brings some funny situation of having an owl "dressed" in snow. The additional videos brings more light to the situation described in your poem.
Comment Written 14-Nov-2020
reply by the author on 14-Nov-2020
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Thank you very much!
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You`re welcome , Writer!!
Comment from royowen
What an amazing photo, sounds like hard time, for a little half frozen birdie. It's a hard life, trying to make a living especially half frozen, fabulous artwork, good luck, blessings Roy
reply by the author on 14-Nov-2020
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What an amazing photo, sounds like hard time, for a little half frozen birdie. It's a hard life, trying to make a living especially half frozen, fabulous artwork, good luck, blessings Roy
Comment Written 14-Nov-2020
reply by the author on 14-Nov-2020
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Thank you for the lovely review!
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Most welcome
Comment from Julie Sandy
Nice poem, I love snow owls, they are so beautiful.
The poem is very clever and the picture works really well with it.
Good luck in competition 5-7-5
reply by the author on 14-Nov-2020
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Nice poem, I love snow owls, they are so beautiful.
The poem is very clever and the picture works really well with it.
Good luck in competition 5-7-5
Comment Written 14-Nov-2020
reply by the author on 14-Nov-2020
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Thank you for the complimentary review!
Comment from Sandra du Plessis
A very well-written 5-7-5 poem about the owl covered in snow just shake off the snow to see his prize waiting for him, a mouse or two is just what he needs.
reply by the author on 14-Nov-2020
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A very well-written 5-7-5 poem about the owl covered in snow just shake off the snow to see his prize waiting for him, a mouse or two is just what he needs.
Comment Written 14-Nov-2020
reply by the author on 14-Nov-2020
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Thank you so much!
