The Teacher
Viewing comments for Chapter 2 "The Teacher - 2"Hostage situation at an elementary school.
3 total reviews
Comment from Alcreator Litt Dear
This Mystery and Crime Fiction, speaks about the teacher - 2, the police make contract; well said, well done, thanks 4 sharing this, happy reviewing this legible on white background, my dear write-post more, fast, time is precious-limited, I, DR, wrote 114 books on God, Humanity, Truth. ALCREATOR
reply by the author on 17-Nov-2021
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This Mystery and Crime Fiction, speaks about the teacher - 2, the police make contract; well said, well done, thanks 4 sharing this, happy reviewing this legible on white background, my dear write-post more, fast, time is precious-limited, I, DR, wrote 114 books on God, Humanity, Truth. ALCREATOR
Comment Written 17-Nov-2021
reply by the author on 17-Nov-2021
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Thank you kindly.
Comment from blondie560
I'm hooked on your story and can't wait to read more. My daughter is a teacher and this is my greatest fear. She teaches in the high school which seems to perhaps have a greater risk. I like Andi cannot see anything without my glasses without being on top of the person or object. It's all a blur. I feel Andi's frustration with not being able to see the situation in front of her.
Negotiator is the correct spelling:)
reply by the author on 13-Nov-2020
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I'm hooked on your story and can't wait to read more. My daughter is a teacher and this is my greatest fear. She teaches in the high school which seems to perhaps have a greater risk. I like Andi cannot see anything without my glasses without being on top of the person or object. It's all a blur. I feel Andi's frustration with not being able to see the situation in front of her.
Negotiator is the correct spelling:)
Comment Written 13-Nov-2020
reply by the author on 13-Nov-2020
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Thank you. My girlfriend is a teacher as well, so I share that fear.
Comment from Michael Ludwinder
I thought this was an excellent chapter. I can't imagine having to face what Kevin was walking into. I like that you used his viewpoint to show this side of the story because I could see his uncomfortableness although he hid it well on the outside. Great job.
reply by the author on 12-Nov-2020
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I thought this was an excellent chapter. I can't imagine having to face what Kevin was walking into. I like that you used his viewpoint to show this side of the story because I could see his uncomfortableness although he hid it well on the outside. Great job.
Comment Written 12-Nov-2020
reply by the author on 12-Nov-2020
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Thank you kindly.
