Renga Two
Viewing comments for Chapter 7 "After Wintry Rain"multi-author book number two
11 total reviews
Comment from tfawcus
This is a fascinating series. Your offering takes the baton from June and returns it to her, with each poem enriching the picture. That wonderful smell of petrichor is nicely encapsulated in your couplet.
reply by the author on 15-Nov-2020
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This is a fascinating series. Your offering takes the baton from June and returns it to her, with each poem enriching the picture. That wonderful smell of petrichor is nicely encapsulated in your couplet.
Comment Written 15-Nov-2020
reply by the author on 15-Nov-2020
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Thank you very much, Tony, coming from you it means a lot to me.
Gypsy
Comment from Y. M. Roger
Oh, this one so very well describes the morning we're having around here, Gypsy -- perfect in sight, feel, and smell! ;) :) Thanx for sharing, my lady!! ;) :) Yvette
reply by the author on 15-Nov-2020
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Oh, this one so very well describes the morning we're having around here, Gypsy -- perfect in sight, feel, and smell! ;) :) Thanx for sharing, my lady!! ;) :) Yvette
Comment Written 15-Nov-2020
reply by the author on 15-Nov-2020
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Thank you, Yvette, I really appreciate your lovely review. Have a wonderful day.
hugs,
gypsy
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Thank you very much, Yvette, for your review and kind words.
Hugs,
Gypsy
Comment from Joan E.
I enjoyed your 7-7 addition to the Renga book and apreciated your appeal to our sense of smell, whereas June focussed on our sense of sight. The rainy picture is just right as well. Smiles- Joan
reply by the author on 13-Nov-2020
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I enjoyed your 7-7 addition to the Renga book and apreciated your appeal to our sense of smell, whereas June focussed on our sense of sight. The rainy picture is just right as well. Smiles- Joan
Comment Written 12-Nov-2020
reply by the author on 13-Nov-2020
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Thank you very much :)
Hugs
Comment from lyenochka
Ah. A perfect follow-up to June's poem that predicted the rain. Your poem helps to smell and feel the rain. Then Roy's poem continued with the rain blessing the ground. Great series!
reply by the author on 13-Nov-2020
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Ah. A perfect follow-up to June's poem that predicted the rain. Your poem helps to smell and feel the rain. Then Roy's poem continued with the rain blessing the ground. Great series!
Comment Written 12-Nov-2020
reply by the author on 13-Nov-2020
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Thank you very much :)
I haven't read Roy's chapter...yay.
Hugs,
Gypsy
Comment from Gloria ....
I also love the loamy scent of soil after the rain.
This is a fine addition to your Renga book and leaves great room for development.
Much enjoyed and many thanks for sharing. :)
Gloria
reply by the author on 12-Nov-2020
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I also love the loamy scent of soil after the rain.
This is a fine addition to your Renga book and leaves great room for development.
Much enjoyed and many thanks for sharing. :)
Gloria
Comment Written 11-Nov-2020
reply by the author on 12-Nov-2020
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Thank you very much for your review and kind feedback.
Hugs,
Gypsy
Comment from June Sargent
I do love the scent of the earth after the rain. The marriage of heaven's pure rain and earth's rich soil...to produce bountiful fruits, flowers and vegetables.
reply by the author on 12-Nov-2020
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I do love the scent of the earth after the rain. The marriage of heaven's pure rain and earth's rich soil...to produce bountiful fruits, flowers and vegetables.
Comment Written 11-Nov-2020
reply by the author on 12-Nov-2020
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Thank you very much for your review and kind feedback.
Hugs,
Gypsy
Comment from Mike Stevens
Another fine poem, Gypsy--here's my try--
Drunken drunks stumble down stairs
and do splash down on their face
Roll over and lose their guts--what do you think of my 777 deal?
reply by the author on 12-Nov-2020
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Another fine poem, Gypsy--here's my try--
Drunken drunks stumble down stairs
and do splash down on their face
Roll over and lose their guts--what do you think of my 777 deal?
Comment Written 11-Nov-2020
reply by the author on 12-Nov-2020
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Thank you very much for your review and kind feedback.
Hugs,
Gypsy
Comment from Mark D. R.
Gypsy,
On walks in the woods after any rainfall, those smells do permeate one's senses regardless of the season. Your 7-7 couplet did exactly that. Nice overall presentation for this Renga collaboration!
Mark
Mark
reply by the author on 12-Nov-2020
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Gypsy,
On walks in the woods after any rainfall, those smells do permeate one's senses regardless of the season. Your 7-7 couplet did exactly that. Nice overall presentation for this Renga collaboration!
Mark
Mark
Comment Written 11-Nov-2020
reply by the author on 12-Nov-2020
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Thank you very much for your review and kind feedback.
Hugs,
Gypsy
Comment from Janetsue
I really like this, Gypsy. I love walking in the rain and enjoy the fresh scent filling the air right afterwards. When we were stationed in Puerto Rico as an Air Force family, we lived across the street from the Caribbean Sea. We were always eager to go down to the beach following a storm and hunt for driftwood, seashells, and sea glass.
reply by the author on 12-Nov-2020
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I really like this, Gypsy. I love walking in the rain and enjoy the fresh scent filling the air right afterwards. When we were stationed in Puerto Rico as an Air Force family, we lived across the street from the Caribbean Sea. We were always eager to go down to the beach following a storm and hunt for driftwood, seashells, and sea glass.
Comment Written 11-Nov-2020
reply by the author on 12-Nov-2020
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Thank you very much for your review and kind feedback. I'm glad it brought such lovely memories.
Hugs,
Gypsy
Comment from juliaSjames
This couplet evokes the scents and feel of a winter's walk. I imagine myself all muffled up against the chill walking in my boots on a path covered in leaf mould beside a cold river.
You use alliteration, consonance and assonance to great effect in these two lines..
Stay safe and blessed
Julia
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reply by the author on 12-Nov-2020
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This couplet evokes the scents and feel of a winter's walk. I imagine myself all muffled up against the chill walking in my boots on a path covered in leaf mould beside a cold river.
You use alliteration, consonance and assonance to great effect in these two lines..
Stay safe and blessed
Julia
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Comment Written 11-Nov-2020
reply by the author on 12-Nov-2020
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Thank you very much for your review, Julia.
Hugs,
Gypsy
