Obsessive Tendencies
Viewing comments for Chapter 9 "A Many Splendored Thing...?"An Unlikely Journey Toward Reconstruction
18 total reviews
Comment from Jasmine Girl
It is an interesting chapter. Twins are jousting verbally in the fantasy land. It is Shakespearean. Twins and fairies. It reminded me of "Twelfth Night".
Well done.
reply by the author on 15-Nov-2020
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It is an interesting chapter. Twins are jousting verbally in the fantasy land. It is Shakespearean. Twins and fairies. It reminded me of "Twelfth Night".
Well done.
Comment Written 14-Nov-2020
reply by the author on 15-Nov-2020
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Thanx for dropping by for an update on Celeste and friends in her saga with Gregor, Lisa -- great to have your support, my lady! ;) Take care and enjoy an exciting week ahead!! ;) Yvette
Comment from Robert Zimmerman
Hello Yvette.
It seems like Celeste is the woodland fairy that is attempting to become the werewolf. Growling seems a little out of place for a woodland fairy. Granted, I don't know anything about either but that does seem a little out of place.
Her enchantment with Gregor is causing her to be mean to her other friends. It appears she's acting like him too.
Since I never read fantasy, maybe I'm just confused.
Z (*~*)
reply by the author on 15-Nov-2020
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Hello Yvette.
It seems like Celeste is the woodland fairy that is attempting to become the werewolf. Growling seems a little out of place for a woodland fairy. Granted, I don't know anything about either but that does seem a little out of place.
Her enchantment with Gregor is causing her to be mean to her other friends. It appears she's acting like him too.
Since I never read fantasy, maybe I'm just confused.
Z (*~*)
Comment Written 13-Nov-2020
reply by the author on 15-Nov-2020
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Okay, for someone that says he 'doesn't get fantasy', you've got a keen sense of the supernatural, Z!!! You are the ONLY reviewer that truly caught onto the REAL reason Celeste 'went off' on Joaquim... so you'd better hand with me so that I feel I've got at least one person reading 'fantasy' and not 'drama'... LOL!! ;) :) Take care and have a wonderful week, my friend (and keep praying for sanity to intervene in our reality!)... ;) Yvette
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Hey Yvette.
Darned if I know how I did that!
I start every read using my hierarchy of thought.
First: Logic
Last: Nuance
Everything else is second. :-)))
Nuance amuses me once I get the logic of things.
I'm glad you liked the review.
Z
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You know I think it's the first that's lacking in so much of our society's thought processes today.... speaking strictly from a mathematical perspective, that is (wink, wink!) ;)
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I get ya. Liberalism lives on emotion. Watch them in the streets. If you will notice, everything is about process, not results. Biden is going to outlaw Covid the day he is inaugurated. He will use Trump's vaccine to stop it.
Z (*?*)
Comment from Gypsy Blue Rose
A Many Splendored Thing...?
by Y. M. Roger
Hello, Yvette,
I like how you expressed the characters emotions. I still remember the way I felt with my first love. :) It's such a great feeling...I wish I could bottle it up. Well done my friend.
Hugs,
Gypsy
reply by the author on 15-Nov-2020
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A Many Splendored Thing...?
by Y. M. Roger
Hello, Yvette,
I like how you expressed the characters emotions. I still remember the way I felt with my first love. :) It's such a great feeling...I wish I could bottle it up. Well done my friend.
Hugs,
Gypsy
Comment Written 13-Nov-2020
reply by the author on 15-Nov-2020
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Thanx for dropping by for an update on Celeste and friends in her saga with Gregor, Gypsy -- sooo great to have your support, my lady! ;) Take care and enjoy an exciting week ahead!! ;) Yvette
Comment from estory
The emotions really come through the dialogue in this chapter, I thought the interaction between the characters was intense, especially from Celeste's point of view. Your descriptions of the scene, but especially the dialogue, were really pointed and sharp and that made the tensions between the characters pull tight. We see Celeste trying to carve out her place between these two and hold onto it. estory
reply by the author on 15-Nov-2020
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The emotions really come through the dialogue in this chapter, I thought the interaction between the characters was intense, especially from Celeste's point of view. Your descriptions of the scene, but especially the dialogue, were really pointed and sharp and that made the tensions between the characters pull tight. We see Celeste trying to carve out her place between these two and hold onto it. estory
Comment Written 12-Nov-2020
reply by the author on 15-Nov-2020
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Thanx for dropping by for an update on Celeste and friends in her saga with Gregor, E -- always good to hear from you over here, sir! ;) Take care and enjoy an exciting week ahead!! ;) Yvette
Comment from Iza Deleanu
Sexy-Alpha heir, trying to conquer the heart of Celeste, or maybe the other way around. I think I need to get back to the previous chapter because I am missing a link:) Thank you for sharing and good luck with the next chapter.
reply by the author on 15-Nov-2020
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Sexy-Alpha heir, trying to conquer the heart of Celeste, or maybe the other way around. I think I need to get back to the previous chapter because I am missing a link:) Thank you for sharing and good luck with the next chapter.
Comment Written 11-Nov-2020
reply by the author on 15-Nov-2020
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Thanx for dropping by for an update on Celeste and friends in her saga with Gregor, Iza -- great to have your support, my lady! ;) Take care and enjoy an exciting week ahead!! ;) Yvette
Comment from Sandra Stoner-Mitchell
Oh, Yvette, I wish I had a six left, I love this story, post your next part on Sunday, even if it's Saturday week, so I can give it the six this story deserves. You have an amazing imagination. Poor Celeste, she did let go, didn't she, LOL. I'm sure she felt better afterwards. So, they know about her and Gregor, I hooted with laughter when Joaquim ... "And, Girly, there ain't no way he'd fit in there! LOL!!! That was a brilliant chapter, my friend. Loved it, can we have another soon? Sunday would be fine!! :)) Sandra xxx
reply by the author on 15-Nov-2020
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Oh, Yvette, I wish I had a six left, I love this story, post your next part on Sunday, even if it's Saturday week, so I can give it the six this story deserves. You have an amazing imagination. Poor Celeste, she did let go, didn't she, LOL. I'm sure she felt better afterwards. So, they know about her and Gregor, I hooted with laughter when Joaquim ... "And, Girly, there ain't no way he'd fit in there! LOL!!! That was a brilliant chapter, my friend. Loved it, can we have another soon? Sunday would be fine!! :)) Sandra xxx
Comment Written 11-Nov-2020
reply by the author on 15-Nov-2020
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Thanx for dropping by for an update on Celeste and friends in her saga with Gregor, Sandra -- good to have your support, my lady! ;) Take care and enjoy an exciting week ahead!! ;) Yvette
Comment from BethShelby
This is quite a story. It proves that you have great imagination and story-telling ability. I enjoyed reading it and I will try to keep up with what is going on this fantasy world.
reply by the author on 15-Nov-2020
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This is quite a story. It proves that you have great imagination and story-telling ability. I enjoyed reading it and I will try to keep up with what is going on this fantasy world.
Comment Written 11-Nov-2020
reply by the author on 15-Nov-2020
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Thanx for dropping by for an update on Celeste and friends in her saga with Gregor, Beth -- great to have your support, my lady! ;) Take care and enjoy an exciting week ahead!! ;) Yvette
Comment from Colin John
Hi Yvette, another fine chapter and all I wanted to do was to sing that song as soon as I read the title, many thanks for sharing, kind regards Colin xx
reply by the author on 15-Nov-2020
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Hi Yvette, another fine chapter and all I wanted to do was to sing that song as soon as I read the title, many thanks for sharing, kind regards Colin xx
Comment Written 11-Nov-2020
reply by the author on 15-Nov-2020
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Thanx for dropping by for an update on Celeste and friends in her saga with Gregor, Colin! ;) Take care and enjoy an exciting week ahead, sir!! ;) Yvette
Comment from aryr
A great continuation chapter, Yvette. Poor Celeste having to put up with the antics / thoughts of Justine and Joaquim. It is a trying time for her and Gregor, you painted a wonderful picture through your choice of words.
reply by the author on 15-Nov-2020
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A great continuation chapter, Yvette. Poor Celeste having to put up with the antics / thoughts of Justine and Joaquim. It is a trying time for her and Gregor, you painted a wonderful picture through your choice of words.
Comment Written 11-Nov-2020
reply by the author on 15-Nov-2020
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Thanx for dropping by for an update on Celeste and friends in her saga with Gregor, Alie -- you know it's great to have your support, my lady! ;) Take care and enjoy an exciting week ahead!! ;) Yvette
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You are so welcome Yvette, I am enjoying this story.
Comment from juliaSjames
Oh my, true love or even true infatuation is a force into itself. Defies reason and logic, bounds over barriers of race, sex, age ... you name it.
This chapter is excellent in its depiction of Celeste's overwhelming emotional response. She's lucky to have understanding friends.
I like the device of including short flashbacks that draw Gregor into the present scene.
A fascinating tale of forbidden love and its consequences, my friend.. I've been there.
Stay safe and blessed
Julia
reply by the author on 15-Nov-2020
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Oh my, true love or even true infatuation is a force into itself. Defies reason and logic, bounds over barriers of race, sex, age ... you name it.
This chapter is excellent in its depiction of Celeste's overwhelming emotional response. She's lucky to have understanding friends.
I like the device of including short flashbacks that draw Gregor into the present scene.
A fascinating tale of forbidden love and its consequences, my friend.. I've been there.
Stay safe and blessed
Julia
Comment Written 11-Nov-2020
reply by the author on 15-Nov-2020
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Thanx for dropping by for an update on Celeste and friends in her saga with Gregor, Julia -- and a special thanx for your insightful comments! ;) Take care and enjoy an exciting week ahead over there!! ;) Yvette
