Delights of Spring
The beauty of spring soothes one's winter fatigue.3 total reviews
Comment from Liz O'Neill
You have several literary techniques that will draw the reader in. Your alliteration is fun to read. Some even leads to being onomatopoetic. You have a lovely metaphor. Your poem speaks the truth. Well done.
reply by the author on 09-Nov-2020
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You have several literary techniques that will draw the reader in. Your alliteration is fun to read. Some even leads to being onomatopoetic. You have a lovely metaphor. Your poem speaks the truth. Well done.
Comment Written 09-Nov-2020
reply by the author on 09-Nov-2020
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Thank you much for the read, review and encouraging words.
Comment from Dolly'sPoems
This is an ambient write filled with the joys of spring and the birth of new life buzzing about in the form of bees collecting nectar, a delightful write, love Dolly x
reply by the author on 09-Nov-2020
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This is an ambient write filled with the joys of spring and the birth of new life buzzing about in the form of bees collecting nectar, a delightful write, love Dolly x
Comment Written 09-Nov-2020
reply by the author on 09-Nov-2020
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Hey, Dolly, thanks. Haven't heard from you in awhile. Hope all is well.
Comment from Michael Ludwinder
Very nicely done. This is a beautiful haiku that shares a beautiful image with just three lines and 17 syllables. Very creative. I love how you share colors and noise (the buzzing) to paint that scene. Great job.
reply by the author on 09-Nov-2020
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Very nicely done. This is a beautiful haiku that shares a beautiful image with just three lines and 17 syllables. Very creative. I love how you share colors and noise (the buzzing) to paint that scene. Great job.
Comment Written 09-Nov-2020
reply by the author on 09-Nov-2020
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Thank you for your read, review and encouraging comments.
