Reviews from

Diversity

enhances creativity! Please check note section .

5 total reviews 
Comment from LisaMay
Exceptional
This work has reached the exceptional level

It's an inspirational, thought-provoking few lines you've given us - challenging the accepted line of thinking that we should concentrate on our similarities, but really it is (as you point out), the variations that make life interesting. That photo is brilliant! And also thank you for including Rhonnie's perceptive review. I enjoyed your posting very much.

 Comment Written 08-Nov-2020


reply by the author on 09-Nov-2020
    Thank you for sharing ..

    I m glad you enjoyed the read and found Rhonnie s review also insightful ..

    I am honoured that you thought my wee poem was worthy of a six star vote .. much appreciated (smile)

    I had that pic quite awhile .. it was just what I needed to complement the poem !

    Keep safe !

Comment from rhonnie69
Exceptional
This work has reached the exceptional level

CIAO POET: This poem is a brilliant account of diversity. Yes...it is diversity that creates similarity, from which comes diversity. Human life originated from one 360 degree straight line which creates a circle. Yes. Like a water stream that moves It takes us places. Where? It takes us back to from which it came, but never stops moving. This phenomenon can be describes as, "infinity," COMPARE: Genesis chapter #2 and at verses # 21 through chapter # 24. THUS:

(21) And the Lord God caused a deep sleep to fall on Adam, and he slept; and He took one of his ribs, and closed up the flesh in it's place.

(22) Then the rib which the Lord God had taken from man He made into a woman, and He brought the woman to the man.

(23) And Adam said: "This is now bone of my bones and flesh of my flesh; she shall be called Woman because she was taken out of man. >>>(diversity.)

(24) Therefore...a man shall leave his father and mother and be joined to his wife, and they shall become, "One Flesh." >>>(similarity.)

So then...the more different we are...the more similar we are. Girl and Boy. Ooooooo! Love and Joy. God bless you, poet. Cordially: rhonnie69.











 Comment Written 07-Nov-2020


reply by the author on 07-Nov-2020
    Ciao Rhonnie !!

    ... once again you enriched added insight to my entry ..

    Can I add your name and reply in my notes section so everyone can read what you wrote .. ??

    Thanks for the shiny star ( biggrin)

    Did you like the pic??
reply by rhonnie69 on 08-Nov-2020
    CIAO POET: YES...I will feel honored if you would be so kind as to add my name and reply in your notes. And by the way...I like you and your work too.
    Ciao...Cordially: rhonnie69. P,S. Yes. I like the pic. Brown and white is alright.
    with me. (biggrin,) R.J.
reply by the author on 08-Nov-2020
    Ciao Poet.. forgive me but the entry was about to hit the booth so I went ahead and added it before your consent .. .. but it was important ..


    Are you still celebrating Biden?s win..??

    I wrote to you a while back but I think it may have been lost in you email box .

    Take care!
reply by rhonnie69 on 09-Nov-2020
    CIAO TEMPESTE: We are best friends.
    You automatically had my consent to do what you did. You knew that all
    along...because you know me. You are much more important to me...than what you did. Your "heads up," on your email letter to me caused me to locate it. I shall reply. God bless you, Tempeste. Ciao. Cordially: rhonnie69.
Comment from Sugarray77
Excellent
Not yet exceptional. When the exceptional rating is reached this is highlighted

Hello Poet... what a very meaningful and well written verse you have created for this prompt. I love the photography and the wise words you wrote to match it. I wish you luck in the Senryu contest!!

Melissa

 Comment Written 07-Nov-2020


reply by the author on 10-Nov-2020
    Ciao Sugarray !

    thank you for the positive review ..

    I hope you read Rhonnie ?s review in the note section ..he added more insight ..

    I found that lovely pic months ago glad I could finally use it ( biggrin)


    Keep safe!
Comment from lancellot
Excellent
Not yet exceptional. When the exceptional rating is reached this is highlighted

It is an interesting saying and I've heard similar before, when speaking about the strength of diversity. But like most things, it is not an absolute. Sometimes differences can be a strength but they can also be a weakness. The world and human history is filled with many examples. I think the real strength is in recognizing this, that like people even ideals are not one size fits all.

Thought provoking piece.

 Comment Written 07-Nov-2020


reply by the author on 07-Nov-2020
    Thank you for sharing your thoughts ..

    This is my take :

    It s a fact that diversity is creativity .. thinking all alike is like stagnant water ..

    different mean input.. a flow of new ideas ..... it s like water in a stream on the move ..it takes you places ..

    The lesson we must learn : not to fear diversity .. not to hate what s different ..

    most wars are caused by fear of not knowing the opponent ..

    We need to change our frame of mind .. way of thinking

    I m glad you enjoyed the read !

    Keep safe.


Comment from Jewell McChesney
Excellent
Not yet exceptional. When the exceptional rating is reached this is highlighted

I love it when one can make a point in just a few words. You did that perfectly. I do
However think
both are important issues to realize. :)
Best of luck in the contest!

 Comment Written 07-Nov-2020


reply by the author on 07-Nov-2020
    I see your point .. I would have loved to add ..mostly ..

    What counts mostly is not how similar but rather how different we are

    But the count limit was 5-7-5


    Thank you for reviewing my wee poem .. I hope you liked the picture?
reply by Jewell McChesney on 07-Nov-2020
    Oh yes! The picture is adorable. Funny that I didn?t even notice that at first.
reply by the author on 07-Nov-2020
    Actually the pic inspired the poem ( biggrin)

    Keep safe!