Son of God
Believe53 total reviews
Comment from joycetreasures
Hello L.Raven,
These three lines you wrote are very powerful with it's message for the love and sacrifice of Jesus. I love this scripture, John 6:37, "John 6:3. "All those the Father gives me will come to me, and whoever comes to me I will never drive away." We must believe that Jesus is the son of God. Yes, this would have been a great contest faith poem. Well done.
reply by the author on 08-Nov-2020
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Hello L.Raven,
These three lines you wrote are very powerful with it's message for the love and sacrifice of Jesus. I love this scripture, John 6:37, "John 6:3. "All those the Father gives me will come to me, and whoever comes to me I will never drive away." We must believe that Jesus is the son of God. Yes, this would have been a great contest faith poem. Well done.
Comment Written 06-Nov-2020
reply by the author on 08-Nov-2020
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HI Joyce, that you so much sweet girl for a wonderful review...
I love this scripture as well...to be one of His children...you have to believe...thank you...love you...Linda xxoo
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Thanks Linda for your kind words. I don't know what I would do without my Lord. Love you also.
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smiling big...xxoo love
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You are welcome.
Comment from Suzanna Ray
Dear I.raven, Both your poem and picture of the Savior are Beautiful, Lovely, Awsome. Where did you find the picture? Please write me back as I would like to make a larger copy for myself. I can surely do it with Robyn's help. as she has done so many times since I started on FanStory with no computer skills.
reply by the author on 08-Nov-2020
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Dear I.raven, Both your poem and picture of the Savior are Beautiful, Lovely, Awsome. Where did you find the picture? Please write me back as I would like to make a larger copy for myself. I can surely do it with Robyn's help. as she has done so many times since I started on FanStory with no computer skills.
Comment Written 06-Nov-2020
reply by the author on 08-Nov-2020
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HI Suzanna, just punch it up on Google...punch in the verse on the picture...and write the word picture...I know Robyn will help you...she is a sweetheart...thank you for a wonderful review...I love the picture as well...love you...Linda xxoo
Comment from Gypsy Blue Rose
Believe
Son of God
by l.raven
Hello, my friend,
How are you? I haven't heard from you in so long, I hope you are well. I am fine, living with my daughter and grandson in Pasadena, California.
I really like your entry for the faith contest, it's too bad you missed it, this would be a good contender. Good syllable count and connection between lines. I am not sure if this is a senryu, your syllable count is 5/5/7... it's okay but I'm more used to the short/long/short type. Good job, sweetie pie.
reply by the author on 09-Nov-2020
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Believe
Son of God
by l.raven
Hello, my friend,
How are you? I haven't heard from you in so long, I hope you are well. I am fine, living with my daughter and grandson in Pasadena, California.
I really like your entry for the faith contest, it's too bad you missed it, this would be a good contender. Good syllable count and connection between lines. I am not sure if this is a senryu, your syllable count is 5/5/7... it's okay but I'm more used to the short/long/short type. Good job, sweetie pie.
Comment Written 06-Nov-2020
reply by the author on 09-Nov-2020
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Hi Gypsy, I'm so glad you are doing fine...
I have been off the site lately more than on...
I'm staying pretty busy...working hard...around the house...
seems to take a toll on me more now...this growing
old stuff...stinks...but I still hold my own...
I hope all is going well with you, your daughter and grandson...you are all staying safe...healthy
my poem started out a 5-7-5...but I missed another contest...
I see them feathered on the front page...with a lot of openings...but then when I go to post...it will say closed so many hours ago...they should remove it off the front page when it is full...so I changed it up a little...with the help of Robyn...same meaning...worded a bit different...it is good hearing from you my sweet friend...God Bless...and thank you for a wonderful review...love you...Linda xxoo
Comment from RGstar
Very strong imagery that is supported by the most powerful image we have come to know through time. Your few words send the message well.
Good to read from you dear friend, your words are always polite and meaningful.
Best wishes.
RG
reply by the author on 09-Nov-2020
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Very strong imagery that is supported by the most powerful image we have come to know through time. Your few words send the message well.
Good to read from you dear friend, your words are always polite and meaningful.
Best wishes.
RG
Comment Written 06-Nov-2020
reply by the author on 09-Nov-2020
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Hi Roy, so good to see you sweet guy...thank you so much for a wonderful review you...God Bless...and best wishes back at you my sweet friend...love Linda xxoo
Comment from rjuselius
This is a brilliant piece of spiritual poetry dear Linda! In a short space you have successfully managed to convey the meaning faith for you and others.
Thank you for sharing!
Blessings and a super-dooper!
Rebekka x
reply by the author on 09-Nov-2020
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This is a brilliant piece of spiritual poetry dear Linda! In a short space you have successfully managed to convey the meaning faith for you and others.
Thank you for sharing!
Blessings and a super-dooper!
Rebekka x
Comment Written 06-Nov-2020
reply by the author on 09-Nov-2020
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Hi Rebekka, thank you my sweet friend for a truly wonderful review...I have been off the site more than on lately...been pretty busy...but it is so good to see you...Blessings too you as well...and you are so very welcome...love you...Linda xxoo
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My pleasure entirely dear Linda <3
Comment from rspoet
Hello Linda,
You've demonstrated the power of a few words
in your succinct poem about faith.
Often short forms have more impact then longer ones
that lose the message in the tangled wording.
It would have been interesting to see this one in the contest.
Well done.
Best wishes to you.
Robert
reply by the author on 09-Nov-2020
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Hello Linda,
You've demonstrated the power of a few words
in your succinct poem about faith.
Often short forms have more impact then longer ones
that lose the message in the tangled wording.
It would have been interesting to see this one in the contest.
Well done.
Best wishes to you.
Robert
Comment Written 06-Nov-2020
reply by the author on 09-Nov-2020
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Hi Robert, so good to see you my sweet friend...thank you my sweet friend for a wonderful review....so glad you like it...and best wishes to you as well...love Linda xxoo
Comment from CrystieCookie999
Nice, little faith-based short-short in 5-5-7. Or at least that is what I counted. I guess the challenge for us quiet people is to 'make known' that belief. It keeps everyone on their toes to be ready to defend the faith. Nice share.
reply by the author on 09-Nov-2020
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Nice, little faith-based short-short in 5-5-7. Or at least that is what I counted. I guess the challenge for us quiet people is to 'make known' that belief. It keeps everyone on their toes to be ready to defend the faith. Nice share.
Comment Written 06-Nov-2020
reply by the author on 09-Nov-2020
Hi Crystie, thank you my sweet friend for a wonderful review...
I wrote it as a 5-7-5 poem...but missed the contest...so I changed it up a bit...thank you sweet girl...love you....Linda xxoo
Comment from Reese Turner
Certainly a nice reminder of the certainty of His grace. In these troubled times, "it is good to know you've got a friend", isn't it? I'm having troulbe this week and you gave a nice reminder...
reply by the author on 09-Nov-2020
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Certainly a nice reminder of the certainty of His grace. In these troubled times, "it is good to know you've got a friend", isn't it? I'm having troulbe this week and you gave a nice reminder...
Comment Written 06-Nov-2020
reply by the author on 09-Nov-2020
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Hi Reese, I am so sorry you are having a bad week...
talk to God...tell Him what has you so upset...
put it in His hands...that is what He wants us to do...
and know my friend in your heart...He will make it right...
and let it go...thank you for a wonderful review...
God Bless...love Linda xxoo
Comment from RPSaxena
Hello L. Raven,
Short and Sweet! - A lovely piece of Poetry transparently depicting the poet's faith.
Smooth and enchanting flow having lucid as well as perfectly matching the theme phraseology.
Picture enhances depth and beauty of the poem.
"Brevity is the soul of wit." If Shakespeare were alive, he would certainly be VERY glad to read this poem.
Missed the Contest, but hit the Mark!
reply by the author on 06-Nov-2020
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Hello L. Raven,
Short and Sweet! - A lovely piece of Poetry transparently depicting the poet's faith.
Smooth and enchanting flow having lucid as well as perfectly matching the theme phraseology.
Picture enhances depth and beauty of the poem.
"Brevity is the soul of wit." If Shakespeare were alive, he would certainly be VERY glad to read this poem.
Missed the Contest, but hit the Mark!
Comment Written 06-Nov-2020
reply by the author on 06-Nov-2020
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Hi RP, I sooooo love your reviews you...you make me feel good
about my writings/poems...thank you so very much...thank you for a wonderful review...and all your shinning stars...smiling sooooo big...I hit the mark with your review...love Linda xxoo
there will be other contest...I don't get into many...and I have a 50/50 chance of getting in on time...LOL...
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L. Raven. Most Welcome!
You ACTUALLY deserve all this.
With best wishes for all other contests too,
~ RP
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smiling sooooooo big you...have a wonderful evening...love xxoo
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Hi L. Raven,
The same to you, and keep yourself visible like this!
Take care. With best wishes,
~ RP
Comment from MissMerri
A short but truly sweet poem Linda. I like very much the message and the art work too. Contemplating the greatness of His sacrifice is a deeply humbling experience that always fills me with immense gratitude. It is evidence of the Father's incomprehensible love. Thank you for this lovely reminder. MM
reply by the author on 09-Nov-2020
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A short but truly sweet poem Linda. I like very much the message and the art work too. Contemplating the greatness of His sacrifice is a deeply humbling experience that always fills me with immense gratitude. It is evidence of the Father's incomprehensible love. Thank you for this lovely reminder. MM
Comment Written 06-Nov-2020
reply by the author on 09-Nov-2020
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Hi Adonna, thank you so much for a wonderful review...
He gave His life for us...and still He loves us like no other...
only asking for us to believe and have faith in Him...
thank you...and you sweet girl are always so welcome...love you...Linda xxoo
