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people that inform sometimes cops16 total reviews
Comment from royowen
I was a blue collar worker who was terrified at union meetings, to see a lynch mob on the loose, then I had a vending machine business, I watched the subtle crime of the white collar, versus the violence of the blue, oh I've seen it! Great rhyming poem my friend, good writing an unusual theme, good luck, blessings Roy
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I was a blue collar worker who was terrified at union meetings, to see a lynch mob on the loose, then I had a vending machine business, I watched the subtle crime of the white collar, versus the violence of the blue, oh I've seen it! Great rhyming poem my friend, good writing an unusual theme, good luck, blessings Roy
Comment Written 13-Nov-2020
Comment from lancellot
You know I didn't notice that some lines rhyme the first time I read this. I was trying to understand the full meaning of it. If I may, I would suggest breaking this into defined stanzas, so that the rhyming element stand out more.
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You know I didn't notice that some lines rhyme the first time I read this. I was trying to understand the full meaning of it. If I may, I would suggest breaking this into defined stanzas, so that the rhyming element stand out more.
Comment Written 11-Nov-2020
Comment from Carmen Ducharme
Lol I find your rhyming poem pretty interesting .It reminds me of the Sopranos .When the girl with the blonde hair can't remember her name turned on the boss man and became an informant .She ended up swimming with the fishes .lol nice job! Good luck in the contest !
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Lol I find your rhyming poem pretty interesting .It reminds me of the Sopranos .When the girl with the blonde hair can't remember her name turned on the boss man and became an informant .She ended up swimming with the fishes .lol nice job! Good luck in the contest !
Comment Written 11-Nov-2020
Comment from AnnieDawn
This jumps from subject to subject so quickly that it becomes a bit to follow without rereading it. The content is good and so is the rhyme. I did enjoy reading it and gave it a couple of times to follow. Thanks for sharing.
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This jumps from subject to subject so quickly that it becomes a bit to follow without rereading it. The content is good and so is the rhyme. I did enjoy reading it and gave it a couple of times to follow. Thanks for sharing.
Comment Written 11-Nov-2020
Comment from Michael Ludwinder
Very nice. This poem was enjoyable and interesting. I thought your rhyme was very natural which really helps the flow of the poem. An interesting and enjoyable read.
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Very nice. This poem was enjoyable and interesting. I thought your rhyme was very natural which really helps the flow of the poem. An interesting and enjoyable read.
Comment Written 11-Nov-2020
Comment from Dolly'sPoems
A sleepy underworld you speak of here exists in all societies and there will always be police informants and sometimes they get away with it and sometimes not, you brought this scene to life here, love Dolly x
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A sleepy underworld you speak of here exists in all societies and there will always be police informants and sometimes they get away with it and sometimes not, you brought this scene to life here, love Dolly x
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Comment Written 11-Nov-2020
