Sweeper-wiper
Santa surprise17 total reviews
Comment from Sandra du Plessis
A very well-written dribble flash fiction about Santa coming to rob the people instead of dropping their presents. They will have a big surprise when they wake up on Christmas morning.
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A very well-written dribble flash fiction about Santa coming to rob the people instead of dropping their presents. They will have a big surprise when they wake up on Christmas morning.
Comment Written 07-Nov-2020
Comment from amada
I like this dribble flash fiction because it is fast, it has action. The best thing it is that it as a surprise at the end. I couldn't believe it was our yearly guest, santa!
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I like this dribble flash fiction because it is fast, it has action. The best thing it is that it as a surprise at the end. I couldn't believe it was our yearly guest, santa!
Comment Written 07-Nov-2020
Comment from Wendy G
I like it, with the twist at the end. Not sure though about having part of it in rhyme and part not. It's not quite my style, but that is the great thing about creativity - we are all different!
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I like it, with the twist at the end. Not sure though about having part of it in rhyme and part not. It's not quite my style, but that is the great thing about creativity - we are all different!
This rating does not count towards story rating or author rank.
The highest and the lowest rating are not included in calculations.
Comment Written 07-Nov-2020
Comment from Jasmine Girl
I like this piece of Dribble Flash Fiction. It is full of actions and humor. The ending is a surprise. I think you have a good chance of winning the contest. Good luck.
Well done.
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I like this piece of Dribble Flash Fiction. It is full of actions and humor. The ending is a surprise. I think you have a good chance of winning the contest. Good luck.
Well done.
Comment Written 06-Nov-2020
Comment from LJbutterfly
This piece is very creative. I sang the first lines, that matched perfectly with the first verse of Jingle Bells. Santa slides down the chimney to steal gifts for himself. You chose the perfect artwork. BAD SANTA. Well done. Best wishes in the contest.
reply by the author on 06-Nov-2020
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This piece is very creative. I sang the first lines, that matched perfectly with the first verse of Jingle Bells. Santa slides down the chimney to steal gifts for himself. You chose the perfect artwork. BAD SANTA. Well done. Best wishes in the contest.
Comment Written 06-Nov-2020
reply by the author on 06-Nov-2020
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Thank you so much for your wonderful review:)
Comment from Jannypan (Jan)
This is so funny, Iza. I love the way it fits the tune of the refrain to Jingle Bells. I could sing it in my mind as I read it. The image is perfect, too. I know this is all in fun. Best wishes.
Respectfully, Jan
reply by the author on 06-Nov-2020
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This is so funny, Iza. I love the way it fits the tune of the refrain to Jingle Bells. I could sing it in my mind as I read it. The image is perfect, too. I know this is all in fun. Best wishes.
Respectfully, Jan
Comment Written 06-Nov-2020
reply by the author on 06-Nov-2020
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Thank you so much for your wonderful review:)
Comment from Roxanna Andrews
Well, what a rotten Santa! I hope he doesn't come to my house! This is a great dribble fiction, it is very dribbley and a real horror story. I hope you do well in the contest.
reply by the author on 06-Nov-2020
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Well, what a rotten Santa! I hope he doesn't come to my house! This is a great dribble fiction, it is very dribbley and a real horror story. I hope you do well in the contest.
Comment Written 06-Nov-2020
reply by the author on 06-Nov-2020
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Thank you so much for your wonderful review:)
Comment from Rosemary wanjiru
Very funny ð???. Truly enjoyable. Santa the burglar knows how to sing and rhyme so well..nice job. And the photo is really cute. A well written post. I loved it
reply by the author on 06-Nov-2020
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Very funny ð???. Truly enjoyable. Santa the burglar knows how to sing and rhyme so well..nice job. And the photo is really cute. A well written post. I loved it
Comment Written 05-Nov-2020
reply by the author on 06-Nov-2020
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Thank you so much for your wonderful review:)
Comment from Cynthia Adams1
I liked your humorous entry in the 50-word contest.
This picture is a real hoot.
Your piece has a nice quick rhythmn to it and the dialogue rang true for the characters.
Good luck in the contest.
reply by the author on 06-Nov-2020
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I liked your humorous entry in the 50-word contest.
This picture is a real hoot.
Your piece has a nice quick rhythmn to it and the dialogue rang true for the characters.
Good luck in the contest.
Comment Written 04-Nov-2020
reply by the author on 06-Nov-2020
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Thank you so much for your wonderful review:)
Comment from estory
A humorous twist on the Santa there, here someone is using Santa to rob your jewelry, sticking his head into the chimney and claiming he is Santa and then cleaning you out. estory
reply by the author on 06-Nov-2020
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A humorous twist on the Santa there, here someone is using Santa to rob your jewelry, sticking his head into the chimney and claiming he is Santa and then cleaning you out. estory
Comment Written 04-Nov-2020
reply by the author on 06-Nov-2020
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Thank you so much for your wonderful review:)
