Comment from Mistydawn

Excellent

What a romantic chapter. It's so well-written, I could picture it in my mind. Feel the love, the bond the two share. You really brought the two to light. Great job as always.

 Comment Written 04-Nov-2020

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reply by the author on 05-Nov-2020

Thanks Mistydawn :)

Jace and Tessa has had a long history and are my favorite couple in the story. They've managed to overcome so many barriers and their passion for one another is never ending. I wish I had a relationship like theirs. Only in the fairytale.

Thanks for your support!
Hugs,
Shana :)

Comment from Alcreator Litt Dear

Excellent

This supernatural fiction of the novel speaks a tale of romantic appeal about a valentine; fostered by just a few realistic dialogues and good order of plot development with a curious ending; well said, well done; thanks for sharing this. ALCREATOR

 Comment Written 03-Nov-2020

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reply by the author on 05-Nov-2020

Thanks Alcreator :)

I'm glad you enjoyed a bit of romance in all the mix of supernatural and adventures in my story.

Thanks for your support!
Sincerely,
Shana :)

Comment from royowen

Exceptional

I hope they can find a "cure" for this creature that inhabits Joseph Harris, an Eve like creature from out of the depths of antiquity, something manufactured from the pit of hell, similar to Jena's creature, but she manages to control hers, useful only for those deserving to be dealt with. Beautifully written Shana, nobody writes thes with all their genealogy complete in the story, well done my friend, blessings Roy

 Comment Written 03-Nov-2020

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reply by the author on 05-Nov-2020

Thank you dear friend :)

The story is moving a long slow but so far I'm happy with how it's going. It's definitely a process to move through all the drama and figure out how the story will turn out. I give Him the power to guide me.
I do have some exciting news. I'm having the fifth book, The Immortal put in audible. My narrator has done a fantastic job telling the story. His voice brings the characters to life. I can't wait for it to be ready to launch!

Thanks for all your support!
Always your fan,
Shana :)

reply by royowen on 05-Nov-2020

Well done Shana, you deserve success

Comment from robyn corum

Excellent

S.,

hahaha I agree, this was done quite tastefully - but I still think you need to add a flag - some people will think it goes rather far into the sex category, I imagine.

The chapter was nicely composed and perfectly paced. I can see why your other chapter received a nod for BOM! Congrats!

One small note:
--> She had long, thick Mahoney hair, green eyes that
--> mahogany?

Thanks!

 Comment Written 03-Nov-2020

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reply by the author on 05-Nov-2020

Thanks Robyn :)

I appreciate your find words and the suggestion. I'm not sure why I misspelled that word. Crazy how you overlook things so simple. You're the best!

Sincerely,
Shana :)

Comment from fm wright

Exceptional

Beautifully written. If I idn't know the genre of what I read, I would have taken itfor a romance novel' The artwork illustrates this chapter very nicely.

 Comment Written 03-Nov-2020

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reply by the author on 05-Nov-2020

Thank you, Faye :)

The series does have a lot of supernatural, action and a bit of horror, although I love to add some romance scenes in there. I want to give readers a little of everything. I was hoping it would come across as tasteful. Some of my love scenes I leave out on FanStory. I've had readers complain although I had placed a warning on the chapter.

Thanks for all your support!
Hugs,
Shana :)

reply by fm wright on 05-Nov-2020

Well, I have no complaints about your writing.Thanks for sharing it.
Hugs,
Faye