Football - A Novel
Viewing comments for Chapter 7 "Football Chapter 4 part 1"A mother faces life's struggles.
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Comment from Sandra Stoner-Mitchell
What on earth is wrong with that man? He has a mouth from the sewer. Poor Katherine has done nothing to warrent such disgusting comments from that dreadful man. He has to go! I can't wait for the next part. Well done, Barbara. Another excellent chapter that gets my so wound up! :)) Sandra xx
reply by the author on 01-Nov-2020
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What on earth is wrong with that man? He has a mouth from the sewer. Poor Katherine has done nothing to warrent such disgusting comments from that dreadful man. He has to go! I can't wait for the next part. Well done, Barbara. Another excellent chapter that gets my so wound up! :)) Sandra xx
Comment Written 01-Nov-2020
reply by the author on 01-Nov-2020
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Thank you for the kind review.
Comment from BethShelby
This is another excellent chapter. I think you have created a very dislike character in Mr. Frost. Every good story needs a antagonist. It sounds as no one really likes him and I would expect him to get in trouble for his comments.
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reply by the author on 01-Nov-2020
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This is another excellent chapter. I think you have created a very dislike character in Mr. Frost. Every good story needs a antagonist. It sounds as no one really likes him and I would expect him to get in trouble for his comments.
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Comment Written 01-Nov-2020
reply by the author on 01-Nov-2020
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It will get worse, I promise. Thank you for the kind review.
Comment from robyn corum
Barbara,
Nice chapter - that guy has got to go. He's rude and opinionated and just wrong. Besides, someone like that cannot possibly have a good attitude toward students like he should. Thanks!
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reply by the author on 01-Nov-2020
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Barbara,
Nice chapter - that guy has got to go. He's rude and opinionated and just wrong. Besides, someone like that cannot possibly have a good attitude toward students like he should. Thanks!
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Comment Written 01-Nov-2020
reply by the author on 01-Nov-2020
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I'm sure he's just bad all the way around, but he's a tenured teacher. They are out there. Thank you for the kind review.
