Horror Movie Scene
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Comment from angel123
Your horror movie scene is well-written and in good taste. I enjoyed reading it and your rhymes are very good. Your artwork choice is interesting. Best wishes
reply by the author on 02-Nov-2020
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Your horror movie scene is well-written and in good taste. I enjoyed reading it and your rhymes are very good. Your artwork choice is interesting. Best wishes
Comment Written 02-Nov-2020
reply by the author on 02-Nov-2020
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Thank you so much. I'm used to writing longer poems, so this was a challenge. I'm glad you liked it. :)
Comment from robyn corum
Dear MYSTERY Author,
I really, really liked your poem. A lot! Somehow you were able to make all these lovely lines so that you told a story AND kept to that monorhyme without making anything sound forced or awkward. Nice!
The bad news is that you signed your poem in the author's notes. You can't do that. Need to edit before it goes to vote. Thanks and good luck!
reply by the author on 31-Oct-2020
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Dear MYSTERY Author,
I really, really liked your poem. A lot! Somehow you were able to make all these lovely lines so that you told a story AND kept to that monorhyme without making anything sound forced or awkward. Nice!
The bad news is that you signed your poem in the author's notes. You can't do that. Need to edit before it goes to vote. Thanks and good luck!
Comment Written 31-Oct-2020
reply by the author on 31-Oct-2020
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Hi...thanks for reviewing my poem. I didn't my name anywhere that I can see, nor did I leave any authors notes. Could you please explain further? Thank you.
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aha! So sorry - It's the name of the author of the example poem. Sorry, sorry!
Comment from RShipp
Your description of the scene for this horror film was great. I felt the film setting itself up for the first take. Enjoyed.
Best of luck in the Write a Monorhyme writing prompt contest.
reply by the author on 01-Nov-2020
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Your description of the scene for this horror film was great. I felt the film setting itself up for the first take. Enjoyed.
Best of luck in the Write a Monorhyme writing prompt contest.
Comment Written 31-Oct-2020
reply by the author on 01-Nov-2020
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Thank you, I'm glad you liked it. :)
Comment from Carmen Ducharme
Very cute poem for Halloween you did a fantastic job .I enjoyed reading it .Thank you for sharing .Good Luck in the contest !God Bless and happy Halloween !
reply by the author on 01-Nov-2020
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Very cute poem for Halloween you did a fantastic job .I enjoyed reading it .Thank you for sharing .Good Luck in the contest !God Bless and happy Halloween !
Comment Written 31-Oct-2020
reply by the author on 01-Nov-2020
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Thank you for this great review, I really appreciate it.
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My pleasure!
Comment from Sandra du Plessis
A very well-written monorhyme poem and just in time for some Halloween fright to make the evening a bit more creepy than usual when there are creepy shadows everywhere.
reply by the author on 01-Nov-2020
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A very well-written monorhyme poem and just in time for some Halloween fright to make the evening a bit more creepy than usual when there are creepy shadows everywhere.
Comment Written 31-Oct-2020
reply by the author on 01-Nov-2020
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Thank you for reading my poem, I really appreciate it.
Comment from AprilViolet
These poems are difficult ones to write with so few words but you nailed it with this one! Setting the scene and providing the reader with a story from start to end. Also never walk in the woods alone. Especially at night! Exceptional! Six stars!
reply by the author on 01-Nov-2020
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These poems are difficult ones to write with so few words but you nailed it with this one! Setting the scene and providing the reader with a story from start to end. Also never walk in the woods alone. Especially at night! Exceptional! Six stars!
Comment Written 31-Oct-2020
reply by the author on 01-Nov-2020
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Thank you for this wonderful 6 star review, it makes Halloween special. :)
Comment from rspoet
This is an excellent mono-rhyme poem for the contest
with very good description of the horror movie theme
or the night of Halloween.
Good choice of rhymes.
Best wishes.
Robert
reply by the author on 31-Oct-2020
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This is an excellent mono-rhyme poem for the contest
with very good description of the horror movie theme
or the night of Halloween.
Good choice of rhymes.
Best wishes.
Robert
Comment Written 30-Oct-2020
reply by the author on 31-Oct-2020
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Thank you, I really appreciate this nice review. :)
