Friends
One friend improving another20 total reviews
Comment from Gypsy Blue Rose
One friend improving another
Friends
Hello, anonymous,
Great entry for the Animal Opinions writing prompt contest. I think the rhyme is inconsistent but I am not an expert. The poem about the porcupine is funny. Good job, and good luck in the contest.
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One friend improving another
Friends
Hello, anonymous,
Great entry for the Animal Opinions writing prompt contest. I think the rhyme is inconsistent but I am not an expert. The poem about the porcupine is funny. Good job, and good luck in the contest.
Comment Written 31-Oct-2020
Comment from Susan Larson
How sweet of Gordon to look after his friend Harry. I enjoyed the whimsy here as well as the lilting llrhythm and rhyme. The format is open to all sorts of animals helping each other.
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How sweet of Gordon to look after his friend Harry. I enjoyed the whimsy here as well as the lilting llrhythm and rhyme. The format is open to all sorts of animals helping each other.
Comment Written 31-Oct-2020
Comment from palmart
Your story brings the idea of animals` solidarity and desires of help each other, despite of their differences. Great rhyming and nice contrasting colors choice. It was a pity that you cannot upload your drawing to illustrate this story. Sometimes, technology plays "hide and seek" and has these (problematic) turns. Good job!
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Your story brings the idea of animals` solidarity and desires of help each other, despite of their differences. Great rhyming and nice contrasting colors choice. It was a pity that you cannot upload your drawing to illustrate this story. Sometimes, technology plays "hide and seek" and has these (problematic) turns. Good job!
Comment Written 31-Oct-2020
Comment from equestrik
This is a very cute entry for the 'Animal Opinions' writing prompt entry. The conversation is creative and the picture is quite cute. Best to you in the contest.
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This is a very cute entry for the 'Animal Opinions' writing prompt entry. The conversation is creative and the picture is quite cute. Best to you in the contest.
Comment Written 31-Oct-2020
Comment from jaded831
Your poem met the criteria, and gave me a light note to begin my day. Before my morning coffee that is hard to do. Your poem was both free verse and rhyme, two for one. I wish I could have seen the picture you drew. Computers can be our best friend or worse enemy.
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Your poem met the criteria, and gave me a light note to begin my day. Before my morning coffee that is hard to do. Your poem was both free verse and rhyme, two for one. I wish I could have seen the picture you drew. Computers can be our best friend or worse enemy.
Comment Written 31-Oct-2020
Comment from Eternal Muse
Adorable. I love your animal pals to bits. How creative and amusing. Excellent imagery and visuals.
This should do very well in the contest, you go it my vote.
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Adorable. I love your animal pals to bits. How creative and amusing. Excellent imagery and visuals.
This should do very well in the contest, you go it my vote.
Comment Written 31-Oct-2020
Comment from duchessofdrumborg
"Friends", is an extremely well-written, and delightfully descriptive piece. Penned with craft and skill, it was a pleasure to both read and review, a work of this standard. Good luck with the contest!
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"Friends", is an extremely well-written, and delightfully descriptive piece. Penned with craft and skill, it was a pleasure to both read and review, a work of this standard. Good luck with the contest!
Comment Written 31-Oct-2020
Comment from Patty Palmer
This is a cute poem for the animal contest. I can just picture what Harry looked like bald! I can also picture Gordon with a devilish grin holding the razor. Good luck with the contest!
Patty
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This is a cute poem for the animal contest. I can just picture what Harry looked like bald! I can also picture Gordon with a devilish grin holding the razor. Good luck with the contest!
Patty
Comment Written 30-Oct-2020
Comment from lyenochka
Oh that is a cute story. I like the idea of the hedge hog and guinea pig being friends. But it wasn't clear to me why the hedge hog was getting stuck - his quills got in the way? I would think the guinea pig might get stuck by his friend but a haircut might solve the problem. Best wishes in the contest!
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Oh that is a cute story. I like the idea of the hedge hog and guinea pig being friends. But it wasn't clear to me why the hedge hog was getting stuck - his quills got in the way? I would think the guinea pig might get stuck by his friend but a haircut might solve the problem. Best wishes in the contest!
Comment Written 30-Oct-2020
Comment from Taurus the Elder
Very good. Cute story of a friendship between two animals. Technically sound, some good rhymes. I loved the ending, shaving the hedge hog.
Great job. Good luck in the contest.
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Very good. Cute story of a friendship between two animals. Technically sound, some good rhymes. I loved the ending, shaving the hedge hog.
Great job. Good luck in the contest.
Comment Written 30-Oct-2020
