Who Dat?
skunks see a porcupine10 total reviews
Comment from equestrik
This is a very cute entry for the 'Animal Opinions' writing prompt entry. The conversation is creative and the picture is quite cute. Best to you in the contest.
reply by the author on 31-Oct-2020
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This is a very cute entry for the 'Animal Opinions' writing prompt entry. The conversation is creative and the picture is quite cute. Best to you in the contest.
Comment Written 31-Oct-2020
reply by the author on 31-Oct-2020
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thank you!
Comment from Julie Sandy
Love this very funny poem perfect for the Animal Opinions competition
I'm sure nothing can defeat a skunk.
Thank you for Sharing
reply by the author on 31-Oct-2020
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Love this very funny poem perfect for the Animal Opinions competition
I'm sure nothing can defeat a skunk.
Thank you for Sharing
Comment Written 31-Oct-2020
reply by the author on 31-Oct-2020
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thanks. I wouldn't want to try. :)
Comment from Dolly'sPoems
This is a fun write and you brought these creatures to life with your fun and inventive words here, this is a lot of fun and I enjoyed dropping in to read this one, love Dolly x
reply by the author on 31-Oct-2020
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This is a fun write and you brought these creatures to life with your fun and inventive words here, this is a lot of fun and I enjoyed dropping in to read this one, love Dolly x
Comment Written 31-Oct-2020
reply by the author on 31-Oct-2020
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thanks, Dolly!
Comment from Sandra du Plessis
A very well-written poem about the skunks opinion about the porcupine with his sharp edges that can pierce through a soft skin. But their weapon is really a stinker.
reply by the author on 31-Oct-2020
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A very well-written poem about the skunks opinion about the porcupine with his sharp edges that can pierce through a soft skin. But their weapon is really a stinker.
Comment Written 31-Oct-2020
reply by the author on 31-Oct-2020
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Ha! clever you! Thanks, Sandra!
Comment from Patty Palmer
You might think it's tacky but I got a good laugh out of it! I love the picture of the two little skunks. They're really cute, as long as they aren't squirting their stinky stuff at anyone. Good luck with the contest!
Patty
reply by the author on 31-Oct-2020
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You might think it's tacky but I got a good laugh out of it! I love the picture of the two little skunks. They're really cute, as long as they aren't squirting their stinky stuff at anyone. Good luck with the contest!
Patty
Comment Written 31-Oct-2020
reply by the author on 31-Oct-2020
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Well, I'm glad, and I thank you for saying that!
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You're welcome!
Patty
Comment from J. Raphael
Interesting! Your words seem to meld together to bring an understanding of the "off center" language that you use. A wise choice for the subject matter of this poem!
reply by the author on 30-Oct-2020
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Interesting! Your words seem to meld together to bring an understanding of the "off center" language that you use. A wise choice for the subject matter of this poem!
Comment Written 30-Oct-2020
reply by the author on 30-Oct-2020
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after I posted that I thought why in the world? It was a last minute write and strange. "Off center" language is nice (I think) of you. 3 stars are sad. But I appreciate your opinion and welcome to Fan Story.
Comment from Iza Deleanu
Ha, ha, ha I love your statement: "Stop, Mac! You fergot--
We can stop 'im wid one shot;
Then, he'll BE ex-tinct
'Cause our stink is real distinct!" Thank you for sharing and good luck with the contest.
reply by the author on 30-Oct-2020
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Ha, ha, ha I love your statement: "Stop, Mac! You fergot--
We can stop 'im wid one shot;
Then, he'll BE ex-tinct
'Cause our stink is real distinct!" Thank you for sharing and good luck with the contest.
Comment Written 30-Oct-2020
reply by the author on 30-Oct-2020
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thank you. You have hit upon a unique way to get enough words in to count, by quoting the post. I will have to try that. FS is always telling me I don't have enough words.
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The thing is I really like that spot:)
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well I always appreciate your reviews and good wishes!
Comment from Pantygynt
I liked the way in which you managed to weave the old joke about how porcupines manage to make love into this amusing little piece, introducing the punchline into a highly believable conversation.
reply by the author on 30-Oct-2020
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I liked the way in which you managed to weave the old joke about how porcupines manage to make love into this amusing little piece, introducing the punchline into a highly believable conversation.
Comment Written 30-Oct-2020
reply by the author on 30-Oct-2020
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wow, thanks! You make my strange little effort sound mucho mejor de lo que es . :)
Comment from LisaMay
Yeah...It's pretty tacky but it's also pretty funny. The rhyme and rhythm is good and your words conjure up a funny mental image of porcupine sex. We don't have skunks in my country so i just have to imagine what they smell like.
reply by the author on 30-Oct-2020
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Yeah...It's pretty tacky but it's also pretty funny. The rhyme and rhythm is good and your words conjure up a funny mental image of porcupine sex. We don't have skunks in my country so i just have to imagine what they smell like.
Comment Written 30-Oct-2020
reply by the author on 30-Oct-2020
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Oh, brother, you can't imagine how awful! My husband hit one on the highway one night and the smell NEVER left our car, even after we had it treated. Thanks for your neat review.
Comment from Elizabeth McCombs
This was very cute. It also flowed very well, and had a steady beat that only faltered on the very last line. If you don't mind concrit, I think maybe something like 'Cause our stink is real distinct' would have worked a little better to keep the beat intact. Ending the beat might have been intentional, however, and if it was please ignore this part of the review. Otherwise, again, this was very cute. Thank you for sharing!
reply by the author on 30-Oct-2020
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This was very cute. It also flowed very well, and had a steady beat that only faltered on the very last line. If you don't mind concrit, I think maybe something like 'Cause our stink is real distinct' would have worked a little better to keep the beat intact. Ending the beat might have been intentional, however, and if it was please ignore this part of the review. Otherwise, again, this was very cute. Thank you for sharing!
Comment Written 30-Oct-2020
reply by the author on 30-Oct-2020
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you're right. will change it. thanks. the silly thing was written at the last minute last night around 1:oo-ish. I have Got to get more sleep :)
Thanks you for your suggestion and very nice comments.
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PS
just tried to recommend you for your help with the last line and I dont have any more. I'm sorry.
