Kiss of Spring
an ABC Poem for the Contest20 total reviews
Comment from JLR
June, simply elegant in style, form and message! A perfect fifth line transition, without disrupting the clear ABCD pattern. Always a personal pleasure to read your very well developed poetry. Good Success in the contest.
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June, simply elegant in style, form and message! A perfect fifth line transition, without disrupting the clear ABCD pattern. Always a personal pleasure to read your very well developed poetry. Good Success in the contest.
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Comment from Sandra du Plessis
A very well-written ABC poem about winter that is creeping in but believe that all will be great when Spring comes to bring new life to blooms and fields covered in the snow for now.
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A very well-written ABC poem about winter that is creeping in but believe that all will be great when Spring comes to bring new life to blooms and fields covered in the snow for now.
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Comment from Dolly'sPoems
This is a very optimistic write June as many fear the winter period and wish for spring, I know I do and I can't wait for those flowers to poke through the soil again, much enjoyed and uplifting, your poems are always diverse, different and interesting, love Dolly x
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This is a very optimistic write June as many fear the winter period and wish for spring, I know I do and I can't wait for those flowers to poke through the soil again, much enjoyed and uplifting, your poems are always diverse, different and interesting, love Dolly x
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Comment from Elizabeth Emerald
CONGRATS ON YOUR RECOGNITION! Cheers. LIZ
I hadn't realized this was ABCD--doesn't sound stilted or forced!--lovely and elegant imagery--kissed by warmth of spring---cherish and nourish. Good luck!
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CONGRATS ON YOUR RECOGNITION! Cheers. LIZ
I hadn't realized this was ABCD--doesn't sound stilted or forced!--lovely and elegant imagery--kissed by warmth of spring---cherish and nourish. Good luck!
Comment Written 29-Oct-2020
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Comment from BethShelby
This is a lovely ABC poem. It now only applies to the knowledge that Spring will come again with the changing season but it could apply to the darkness we feel now because of the pandemic. It too will eventually pass and life will be good again.
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This is a lovely ABC poem. It now only applies to the knowledge that Spring will come again with the changing season but it could apply to the darkness we feel now because of the pandemic. It too will eventually pass and life will be good again.
Comment Written 29-Oct-2020
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So glad you enjoyed this piece. Thank you for dropping by to read and share your insights. I agree. This could apply to the difficult times we are facing now.
Comment from John Carey
Very nice ABC poem. It certainly is that time of year that we need to believe there is something on the far side of winter. I especially liked "Cherish and nurture that seed of hope." Thank you for sharing!
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Very nice ABC poem. It certainly is that time of year that we need to believe there is something on the far side of winter. I especially liked "Cherish and nurture that seed of hope." Thank you for sharing!
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Comment from Bill Schott
This ABC poem, Believe, follows the ABCD themed formatting and reminds the reader that hope springs eternal......................
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This ABC poem, Believe, follows the ABCD themed formatting and reminds the reader that hope springs eternal......................
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Comment from Cindy Decker
Nice ABC poem, June. I am hoping this winter will be mild and short in duration. During some winters I've felt a cold loneliness. Thank you for your reminder that Spring will return as it does, year after years the photo you've chosen is beautiful.
Good luck in the contest.
Best wishes, Cindy.
I love your poetry, June. It's so orininal!
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Nice ABC poem, June. I am hoping this winter will be mild and short in duration. During some winters I've felt a cold loneliness. Thank you for your reminder that Spring will return as it does, year after years the photo you've chosen is beautiful.
Good luck in the contest.
Best wishes, Cindy.
I love your poetry, June. It's so orininal!
Comment Written 29-Oct-2020
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Comment from Mrs. KT
Hello June!
Now, you knew I would love this poetic offering! It resonates deeply with me for form and message - but mostly for message as I struggle with this format, and I wait each spring for the beauty I planted in the fall to bloom!
Kudos!
Thank you for sharing!
diane
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Hello June!
Now, you knew I would love this poetic offering! It resonates deeply with me for form and message - but mostly for message as I struggle with this format, and I wait each spring for the beauty I planted in the fall to bloom!
Kudos!
Thank you for sharing!
diane
Comment Written 29-Oct-2020
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So glad you enjoyed this piece. Thank you for dropping by to read and share your insights. It is definitely the desire to see my garden in full bloom again that keeps me going through the winter months.
Comment from Joanne Gill-Maddick
Very nice abc poem
For the contest. Nice choice of words. Deep under snow -flowers will bloom again. When kissed by the warmth of spring. Lovely photo.
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Very nice abc poem
For the contest. Nice choice of words. Deep under snow -flowers will bloom again. When kissed by the warmth of spring. Lovely photo.
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