Bright Lights
We might see better in the dark.40 total reviews
Comment from rspoet
Hello Amada,
You've written a wonderful poem for the faith contest
with an excellent opening line and interesting contrast
between perception in darkness and light.
Much like insight, that only comes with experience.
Nicely done.
Best wishes to you and good luck in the contest.
Robert
reply by the author on 31-Oct-2020
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Hello Amada,
You've written a wonderful poem for the faith contest
with an excellent opening line and interesting contrast
between perception in darkness and light.
Much like insight, that only comes with experience.
Nicely done.
Best wishes to you and good luck in the contest.
Robert
Comment Written 31-Oct-2020
reply by the author on 31-Oct-2020
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Thank you, Robert. I am asking myself, "did I write that.." My muse is intriguing...
Comment from robyn corum
A.,
OOoOOOooOOOooo... What a mouthful you've said here~ I loved the description of your early years - so appropriate. Lovely!
And time and distance does change perspectives, doesn't it?
Thank you and good luck!
reply by the author on 31-Oct-2020
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A.,
OOoOOOooOOOooo... What a mouthful you've said here~ I loved the description of your early years - so appropriate. Lovely!
And time and distance does change perspectives, doesn't it?
Thank you and good luck!
Comment Written 31-Oct-2020
reply by the author on 31-Oct-2020
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Thank you, Robin. You understood it all so well... Thank you.
Comment from roof35
This is an excellent entry for the My Faith contest. It takes reading twice to understand its true meaning. You chose a lovely illustration for your lovely poem.
reply by the author on 01-Nov-2020
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This is an excellent entry for the My Faith contest. It takes reading twice to understand its true meaning. You chose a lovely illustration for your lovely poem.
Comment Written 31-Oct-2020
reply by the author on 01-Nov-2020
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Thank you for reading my work and your warm comments.
Comment from rama devi
I sought the linguistic of wild lights,
WHAT A FANTASTIC OPENING LINE! I love it!
Great simile.
Interesting closing twist - the inner lights shine brighter when vision is impaired.
One suggestion:
Today(,) I find those lights crystalize
US spelling uses two L's for crystallize.
Superb phonics with the medley of L and S sounds, especially.
Love this.
Potent voicing! Lovely presentation.
Warmly,
rd
reply by the author on 01-Nov-2020
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I sought the linguistic of wild lights,
WHAT A FANTASTIC OPENING LINE! I love it!
Great simile.
Interesting closing twist - the inner lights shine brighter when vision is impaired.
One suggestion:
Today(,) I find those lights crystalize
US spelling uses two L's for crystallize.
Superb phonics with the medley of L and S sounds, especially.
Love this.
Potent voicing! Lovely presentation.
Warmly,
rd
Comment Written 31-Oct-2020
reply by the author on 01-Nov-2020
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Comments taken, dear rd. Thank you, have a grat Sunday.
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You too! :)
Comment from Eternal Muse
A wonderful entry in that contest. I like the wisdom of your words, your great imagery and the artwork.
Good luck in the contest.
reply by the author on 01-Nov-2020
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A wonderful entry in that contest. I like the wisdom of your words, your great imagery and the artwork.
Good luck in the contest.
Comment Written 31-Oct-2020
reply by the author on 01-Nov-2020
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hank you, Muse. I appreciate your comments and good wishes in the contest.
Comment from duchessofdrumborg
"Bright Lights". is a well-written, and thought-provoking piece. It was a pleasure to both read and review, this poet's work. I look forward to seeing your next post.
reply by the author on 31-Oct-2020
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"Bright Lights". is a well-written, and thought-provoking piece. It was a pleasure to both read and review, this poet's work. I look forward to seeing your next post.
Comment Written 30-Oct-2020
reply by the author on 31-Oct-2020
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Hi Duchess, thank you for your great review.
Hi amanda,
you're very welcome. You certainly deserved the kind review.
God bless you, take care, and keep safe!
the Duchess
Comment from Joan E.
Good point--we might see better in impaired light! I admired your faith poem and contrasting when you were young with today. I enjoyed Helvi2's mesmerizing light. Best wishes in the contest- Joan
reply by the author on 31-Oct-2020
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Good point--we might see better in impaired light! I admired your faith poem and contrasting when you were young with today. I enjoyed Helvi2's mesmerizing light. Best wishes in the contest- Joan
Comment Written 30-Oct-2020
reply by the author on 31-Oct-2020
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Thank you Joan for reading my poem.
Comment from Janet Foor
Lovely artwork to accompany your well written poem of faith. A vivid comparison of sight in the eyes of our youth to the eyes of later, wiser years.
Well done.
Blessings
Janet
reply by the author on 31-Oct-2020
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Lovely artwork to accompany your well written poem of faith. A vivid comparison of sight in the eyes of our youth to the eyes of later, wiser years.
Well done.
Blessings
Janet
Comment Written 30-Oct-2020
reply by the author on 31-Oct-2020
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Thank you Janet for reading this poem.
Comment from Dorothy Farrell
Hello Amada, this is a short and very interesting poem. It suggests you put your faith in the study of language and art - lovely picture. 'We might see better in the dark' - you make a point here. We can be blinded by light. Good Luck in the contest. Warm regards Dorothy x
reply by the author on 31-Oct-2020
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Hello Amada, this is a short and very interesting poem. It suggests you put your faith in the study of language and art - lovely picture. 'We might see better in the dark' - you make a point here. We can be blinded by light. Good Luck in the contest. Warm regards Dorothy x
Comment Written 30-Oct-2020
reply by the author on 31-Oct-2020
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Thank you, Dorothy, I appreciate your support.
Comment from sammielwf
Amada,
An interesting entry for the My Faith contest.
Your photo accompanying your piece was quite lovely and gave added emphasis to your words.
Sammielwf
reply by the author on 01-Nov-2020
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Amada,
An interesting entry for the My Faith contest.
Your photo accompanying your piece was quite lovely and gave added emphasis to your words.
Sammielwf
Comment Written 30-Oct-2020
reply by the author on 01-Nov-2020
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Thank you for your accepting comments, Sam.
