Comment from Gypsy Blue Rose

Excellent

Hello, anonymous,

Great entry for the Traditional Ghost Story. writing prompt contest. It's a good story poem. It was engaging and spooky. I like the ending. Good rhyme and meter. Good luck in the contest.

 Comment Written 29-Oct-2020

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reply by the author on 29-Oct-2020

thanks so much!

Comment from Sharon Haiste

Excellent

I think this is a good entry for the Traditional Ghost Story writing prompt.
This well rhymed puts a new twist on the headless horseman story.
Well done and good luck to you with the contest.
Sharon

 Comment Written 29-Oct-2020

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reply by the author on 29-Oct-2020

Thanks, Sharon, for reading it and for your good wishes.

Comment from davisr (Rhonda)

Exceptional

You're delightful poem put a smile on my face. Finally, justice for poor Ichibod. Little sister had lots of spunk, and creative as well!

The poetry itself was flawless, the rhythm so smooth, it felt seamless.

Great job, and good luck in the contest,
Rhonda

 Comment Written 29-Oct-2020

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reply by the author on 29-Oct-2020

Bless you, Rhonda, and many thanks for a lovely review! It is much appreciated! and muchisimas gracias for the 6!!! :)

Comment from Elizabeth Emerald

Excellent

Clever and creepy! Wickedly witty--impressive that you put this story in rhyme--so many stanzas! Now I'm prompted to read the Legend--it's been 50-something years!

 Comment Written 29-Oct-2020

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reply by the author on 29-Oct-2020

thank you so much. You could probably you tube the Disney version, too, I would imagine, tho I have not tried it. not to take away from reading it!!
Thank you again for a really nice review!

Comment from Y. M. Roger

Excellent

LOL!! ;) Well, this is a fun and unexpected offering for the contest and was certainly well written with both rhythm and rhyme! ;) Thanx for sharing that smile and best of luck at the polls! ;)

 Comment Written 28-Oct-2020

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reply by the author on 28-Oct-2020

Thanks, Yvette! for the smile and the good wishes!

Comment from Bloomer Burbs

Excellent

I loved your very imaginative and creative poem about Halloween. your poem flowed very smoothly and was a pleasure to read and absorbed.

Thank you kindly for sharing

Regards, Peter

 Comment Written 28-Oct-2020

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reply by the author on 28-Oct-2020

Thank you very much for your lovely comments.

Comment from equestrik

Excellent

This is a very clever poem for the Traditional Ghost Story writing prompt. I am not sure if it matters that there is not a ghost but I loved it. The picture was perfect with your writing as well.

 Comment Written 28-Oct-2020

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reply by the author on 28-Oct-2020

thanks, and you may be right, but I guess we'll see.
Thanks for your very nice comments.

Comment from Dolly'sPoems

Excellent

A fun Halloween poem with a bouncy tale choice words that made me smile, a fun presentation for the contest and I wish you luck, you amused me here, love Dolly x

 Comment Written 28-Oct-2020

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reply by the author on 28-Oct-2020

thanks, Dolly! Always glad to amuse. :)

Comment from Roxanna Andrews

Excellent

This is indeed a grand sequel where the sister gets sweet revenge. This is a lot of fun and very well written with great meter and rhyme. I saw no errors and wish you great success in the contest.

 Comment Written 28-Oct-2020

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reply by the author on 28-Oct-2020

Thanks, Roxanna! Your lovely comments are much appreciated.