Halloween Party
When does the fun begin?24 total reviews
Comment from zanya
Spine-chilling and well told drawing the reader in with that lovely description of the landscape of the night 'dull cold moon'- something is definitely afoot !
reply by the author on 26-Oct-2020
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Spine-chilling and well told drawing the reader in with that lovely description of the landscape of the night 'dull cold moon'- something is definitely afoot !
Comment Written 26-Oct-2020
reply by the author on 26-Oct-2020
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Thank you for your review. I'm new at posting on this site and writers like you reviewing my work will help me grow. I appreciate your comments and stars.
Comment from Mary Vigasin
What a twist in your story. Here I was expecting an attack to your driver and your driver was the monster.
Well done Lorraine. Very clever write.
This takes your reader by surprise.
Good luck in the contest.
Mary
reply by the author on 26-Oct-2020
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What a twist in your story. Here I was expecting an attack to your driver and your driver was the monster.
Well done Lorraine. Very clever write.
This takes your reader by surprise.
Good luck in the contest.
Mary
Comment Written 26-Oct-2020
reply by the author on 26-Oct-2020
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Thank you Mary. I appreciate your comments and stars. It means a lot coming from such an experienced writer.
Comment from Jeffrey L. Michaux
That was quite the surprise. The one that appeared to be the prey was clearly just the predator. What a clever way to catch its prey. Thanks for sharing this grisly and well written work. Well done!
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reply by the author on 26-Oct-2020
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That was quite the surprise. The one that appeared to be the prey was clearly just the predator. What a clever way to catch its prey. Thanks for sharing this grisly and well written work. Well done!
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Comment Written 26-Oct-2020
reply by the author on 26-Oct-2020
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Thank you Jeffrey for your review and stars. I appreciate hearing what experienced writers have to say.
Comment from Cynthia Adams1
Your story truly held my interest throughout and the ending was nothing I could have imagined. Excellent job.
There was enough good description in the piece that I could see the action. You did a very nice job. Keep up the good work.
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reply by the author on 26-Oct-2020
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Your story truly held my interest throughout and the ending was nothing I could have imagined. Excellent job.
There was enough good description in the piece that I could see the action. You did a very nice job. Keep up the good work.
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Comment Written 26-Oct-2020
reply by the author on 26-Oct-2020
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Hi Cynthia,
I really appreciate your review and comments. I'm honored that you read my work. Thank you.
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You are most welcome.
